Mat Posted May 9, 2020 Report Share Posted May 9, 2020 So I am writing a Stormlight fanfic and I wanted help on a scene where an enemy Shardbearer is attacking the army. The scene is from the perspective of a squadleader (the rank that Kaladin was just above when he killed a Shardbearer) and I wanted help with writing battle scenes in general. I gave it my best shot but I appreciate any tips! Note: This is chapter 5 of the fanfic Also I would appreciate and typos/grammatical errors spotted. I noticed one while getting the link ready, so I bet there's more! Thanks Link: https://nooksackschools-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/ethan_morris_nv_k12_wa_us/EZPx-ZImmldEumdKS8wy2xwBbGKlX9T1rP_EO45UbkLwtA?e=KJhcen 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mat Posted May 9, 2020 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2020 I don't think you can edit the document, but if you can please don't 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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