Kelsier'sGodComplex

Warbreaker Book Report

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So, in my ELA class, I have to write a poem about a chosen book. I chose Warbreaker. It has to be in Haiku form. It has to be about how the characters changed throughout the course of hte book. This is what I have so far. Any tips or advice on how to make it better?

Siri: 

Beginning:

Unimportant, free

Living her life carelessly

The princess baby

Middle:

Father gave her up

Father loved Vivenna more

Forced into marriage

End:

Queen of Hallendren

Serious and hardworking

Time to stop a war



 

Vivenna:

Beginning:

Controlled childhood

Destined to marry God King

Oh, wait, nevermind

 

Middle:

Unimportant, free

Father sent Siri instead

Time to go save her

 

End:

Turned to a beggar

Was taught how to use her Breath

She fled with Vasher



 

Lightsong:

Beginning:

A god people praise

He doesn't feel that special

Man brought back to life

 

Middle:

A coming war starts

Time to be responsible

The Pahn Khal rise up

 

End:

The God King is trapped

And Blushweaver has been killed

My breath becomes yours.

 

Nightblood:

A black talking sword

Who is obsessed with evil

Does not change that much. 

 

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8 hours ago, Kelsier'sGodComplex said:

He wanted Vivenna more

Nice poem.  I would change this to loved.

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At first glance Id recommend moving the "Beginning/Middle/End" bits to a more obvious title location rather than in the first line, it throws off the syllable count.  

 

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