Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 (edited) Hi, I'm new here. I am relatively new to the cosmere, and I am interested in making my own magic systems and homebrewing content for D&D, and would like some outside feedback and possibly even some help playtesting. I have read the first mistborn trilogy and am currently reading the stormlight archives series. I have a magic system in the works, or at least a skeleton of it, and I am constantly homebrewing more stuff for D&D, and need advice. any people willing to help, please do, because to be honest, I need all of the help I can get. I look forward to meeting and getting to know you and the cosmere, and hope that you will welcome me, thank you. As a trial, I will post one of my newest D&D homebrew creatures, and will ask for feedback, and playtesting. in return, I will allow you to use the creature in any campaigns you make as long as you give me credit for making the creature. thank you for reading, and I look forward to time together with the community on the 17th shard. also, any homebrew content will be available on D&D beyond when they are finished. Description The voltaic snapper resembles an alligator with an iguana-like head. It has scales that range in color from olive green to light brown. It has two horns, one behind each eye, that have concentrated silver deposits in them, and more deposits in the armor plating all over its body with small bolts of electricity arcing all over it. It has a long, whip-like tail with a sharp, pronged protrusion like a sharpened tuning fork at the end, and you can often see small amounts of electricity arcing between the prongs, and the tailspike has higher concentrated silver deposits than those in the rest of the body, and is prized by poachers and monster hunters alike because of its high value on the market, that it counts as a silvered weapon, and that it retains its ability to conduct and produce harmful levels of electricity. The eggshells are highly prized on the black market because the insides are lined with silver. The body is covered in a conductive mucus that is used to shock and restrain its prey. These feared beasts found dwelling on the edge of swamps and grasslands are often coveted and sometimes tamed and kept by Blue and Brass dragons as pets and guard dogs, and are used to cover their layers in their conductive mucus, slowing enemies, and often leading to their mass electrocution and death, and in return, the dragons feed the creatures silver from their hoard. The voltaic snappers own homes are often found in burrows or small caves, and are covered in the mucus. When you approach this creature or its home, your hairs will stand on end, and the air will have a faint smell of ozone. This creature is often found near large deposits of silver, eating the metal to retain its conductive nature, making it a feared menace near silver mines. Edited January 21, 2020 by Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker need to attach content 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karger Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 (edited) Welcome. You should probably post the latter half of this in the creator's corner sub thread. Care to tell us more about yourself? Favorite metal from mistborn? How far along you are in SA? What cosmere book you want to read next? Edited January 21, 2020 by Karger 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoWibble Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 Welcome! I don't play D&D yet, so I don't know. *also, you double posted 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker Posted January 21, 2020 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 to answer your questions, I am reading the second SA book, and If I had to be any misting, I would probably be a coinshot, because I love the idea of being able to "fly", and, of course, the possibilities for self defence. also, I am new to doing something like this, as my parents do not let me have social media, and May need some help figuring this out, and I joined because the website was recommended by a friend of mine. and, to be honest, there are so many series on my to-read list that I cannot remember all of the different series. however, I will look into it, and I am open to recommendations. I have also read the reckoners series, but I did not say that at first because it is not a cosmere series. as for information about my self, that may have to wait, as I am hesitant about putting any info about myself online. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Honorless Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 Hello there, @Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker! Welcome to the Shard! As @Mushroom Catalog & @GoWibblepointed out, it looks like you accidentally double-posted this actually you probably should move this to Creator's Corner like @Karger suggested, or perhaps the RP forums. You'll get a wider audience there. I can ask for it to be moved, if you'd like me to 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker Posted January 21, 2020 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 errrrrr I already posted there, but thanks for the offer! i really appreciate it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karger Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 Just now, Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker said: I already posted there, but thanks for the offer! i really appreciate it You can post twice in response to someone else just don't post two times in a row. Edit your first post instead. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Honorless Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 @Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker, do you plan to use this idea for a Cosmere RPG? A new world running with/inspired by it? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Cardinal of Death Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 welcome to the shard since i see you've read the reckoners series which is your favorite book from that series 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker Posted January 21, 2020 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 not quite, this website was simply recommended by a friend of mine, @the cardinal of death 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aragorn the Wyrmspeaker Posted January 21, 2020 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 35 minutes ago, the cardinal of death said: welcome to the shard since i see you've read the reckoners series which is your favorite book from that series I would have to say... hmmmm, calamity, I guess. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Cardinal of Death Posted January 21, 2020 Report Share Posted January 21, 2020 nice choice whos your favorite character 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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