Lunamor

The Girl Who Looked Up (Extended Version)

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Just now, AonEne said:

:wacko: No...

Hmm... research time then, I guess! :P

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My soul is broken now. Why would you do that!?!? 

On the bright side, I could become a radiant...

I think it was really good, and I read Sanderson books.

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14 minutes ago, Mushroom Catalog said:

My soul is broken now. Why would you do that!?!? 

On the bright side, I could become a radiant...

I think it was really good, and I read Sanderson books.

You’re welcome. :P

And thanks! I am glad you liked it. Also, a question: Was anything super unclear about it? I wasn’t sure if I needed to add any more explaining. I am thinking of touching it up a bit before sending it to Brandon, but it is really hard to edit your own work. :P

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Everything was unclear, especially about her mom and the wind and the connection there. But it was unclear in a good way. It was still unclear though.

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12 minutes ago, AonEne said:

Everything was unclear, especially about her mom and the wind and the connection there. But it was unclear in a good way. It was still unclear though.

Ok, thanks for the feedback!

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Anytime!

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On 5/17/2019 at 5:35 PM, Lunamor said:

Was anything super unclear about it? I wasn’t sure if I needed to add any more explaining. I am thinking of touching it up a bit before sending it to Brandon, but it is really hard to edit your own work. :P

 

On 5/17/2019 at 6:23 PM, AonEne said:

Everything was unclear, especially about her mom and the wind and the connection there. But it was unclear in a good way.

It was BEAUTIFULLY UNCLEAR!!! It was the level of unclear the WoK was!!! Send this to brandon!  

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4 hours ago, ShardShaper said:

It was BEAUTIFULLY UNCLEAR!!! It was the level of unclear the WoK was!!! Send this to brandon!  

Thanks! I will probably sent it to him once I figure out which form thing to use.

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On 5/15/2019 at 8:21 PM, Lunamor said:

Do you know how I would do so? I tried looking at the contact info on the website, but the only categories were for things like questions and stuff.

You could always try giving it to them as a gift at a signing.

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3 hours ago, Wyndlerunner said:

You could always try giving it to them as a gift at a signing.

Good idea. I don’t know I could wait that long, though :P

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3 minutes ago, Lunamor said:

Good idea. I don’t know I could wait that long, though :P

It would also give you a good amount of time to refine it, and also make it truly special to give it to the man himself in person

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Just now, Wyndlerunner said:

It would also give you a good amount of time to refine it, and also make it truly special to give it to the man himself in person

Good points. Yeah, now I think I’m gonna go with that option. Thanks!

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Just now, Lunamor said:

Good points. Yeah, now I think I’m gonna go with that option. Thanks!

Anytime Luna!

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