Emi Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 2 minutes ago, AonEne said: Don't worry! As I said i'm only 13 so I don't enjoy too much romantic scenes in the book, or RP 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 Quote Hi, @Emi! Welcome to the Knights Next Door! 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Sorana Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 (edited) 1 hour ago, xinoehp512 said: Sheln raised his eyebrow slightly. Quite upset, isn't he? he thought to himself. Out loud, he replied to the boy's question. "Where do you want me to start?" he asked, injecting a slight hint of amusement into his tone. "Just start at the beginning!" Shana rolled her eyes at this attempt to buy time. "It can't be that hard? Just tell us what you know and be done with it." She shot an apologetic look at Everest when she realized that she had intruded in his interrogation after all. But it was just so annoying, so nervewrecking to listen to this Voidbringer, to see him smile and make fun of them. Annoying and incredibly dangerous. If it continued like that, she might loose her temper after all. Taking a deep breath she calmed herself, pictured a flame burning happily without any wind stiring it, without too much food making it grow higher and higher, stronger and faster. "This can be over soon if you cooperate." she added, although she had no real idea what they would do, when it was over. Kill him probably, as they had killed them all so far. There wasn't anything else they could do - except. Her eyes remained on him when a throught struck her again. Maybe there was a cure, a way to solve this without fighting and killing. And maybe they had found somebody who knew how to do it. @The_Archivist ============== Quote Welcome Emi! I hope you'll have a great time here! Edited May 4, 2020 by Sorana 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 Quote Hi, @Emi! Here's a tip- click the button that looks like a double quote to create a blank quote box such as this one. 2 minutes ago, Sorana said: "Just start at the beginning!" Shana rolled her eyes at this attempt to buy time. "It can't be that hard? Just tell us what you know and be done with it." She shot an apologetic look at Everest when she realized that she had intruded in his interrogation after all. But it was just so annoying, so nervewrecking to listen to this Voidbringer, to see him smile and make fun of them. Annoying and incredibly dangerous. If it continued like that, she might loose her temper after all. Taking a deep breath she calmed herself, pictured a flame burning happily without any wind stiring it, without too much food making it grow higher and higher, stronger and faster. "This can be over soon if you cooperate." she added, although she had no real idea what they would do, when it was over. Kill him probably, as they had killed them all so far. There wasn't anything else they could do - except. Her eyes remained on him when a throught struck her again. Maybe there was a cure, a way to solve this without fighting and killing. And maybe they had found somebody who knew how to do it. @The_Archivist ============== Quote It is at this point that Sheln would give an explanation of the original purpose of the Voidbringers. However, we have yet to decide on what that purpose is... so I'm sort of in a bind. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Sorana Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 22 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said: It is at this point that Sheln would give an explanation of the original purpose of the Voidbringers. However, we have yet to decide on what that purpose is... so I'm sort of in a bind. Quote Do you have a preference/ ideas how to go on wihtout stalling the whole rp for a longer time? Do you have something in mind regarding their original purpose, if such a purpose exists? @AonEne 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 Quote I know what I want their original motivations to be. But there was discussion regarding the issue that was never fully resolved, so my hands are tied. Unless whoever it was that challenged my idea either rescinds their disapproval or agrees on a compromise, I can't treat it as canon and therefore can't include it in my writing. There are other ways around this- it's because Shana asked Sheln to start from the beginning that he's going to start by talking about the start of the feud between the Radiants and Voidbringers; change that wording and things could progress differently. However, Sheln's sure to bring it up at some point, if only to use as ammunition against Everest, so we might as well talk about it in parallel. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emi Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 Quote I don't want to be annoing, because of being new, but can somebody explain what's happening here now? 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Channelknight Fadran Posted May 4, 2020 Report Share Posted May 4, 2020 Quote Not much, as far as I'm concerned. Somebody's getting interrogated, somebody found a cat, some people are (I think) chatting with a feruchemist, and others are chilling in the house. Depending on how you want to introduce your character is a good indicator of how relevant everything is to you. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AonEne Posted May 5, 2020 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 Quote 8 hours ago, Emi said: I don't want to be annoing, because of being new You’re never annoying, asking questions is always fine You could introduce your character by having her knock on the door. (By the way, can I have her updated character sheet?) Since the poll is still undecided, I’m taking the top four options and putting them back in, this time with only one that can be voted on. Sorana and Xino, so as not to interrupt the RP with lots of OOC discussion, do you want to figure this out on Discord for ease of conversation? 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emi Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 1 hour ago, AonEne said: You’re never annoying, asking questions is always fine You could introduce your character by having her knock on the door. Ok I'll try Sara started knocking to the door. Her head was filled by doubts. What if she was tricked and now, was knocking to wrong door ?The bad feeling couldn't leave her head. She always was seen as a person, who always is doing things hastily. Yep, now she was near to agree with that, especially, that nobody was opening the door.heard She knoked one more time, louder, so there was no possibility that people here, whoever they were, won't react. 1 hour ago, AonEne said: By the way, can I have her updated character sheet? Sure! 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AonEne Posted May 5, 2020 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 44 minutes ago, Emi said: She knoked one more time, louder, so there was no possibility that people here, whoever they were, won't react. Cassie heard the door and muttered a curse, hurrying to wring her hair out a little more with a towel. By the time she was dressed and jogging downstairs, the knocking was louder. She opened the door and smiled at the girl. “Hey, can I help you?” 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emi Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 "Oh, hi". Sara was litle nervous although, she thried to not show it up. However, when the door opened her insecurity has diminished. A girl stood there. She was young, although Sara could not fully assess her age. The stranger was really short, reaching Sara's chin. She was smiling radiantly,so in response Sara smiled too After the older one aked Sara a question, Sara replied doubtfully: "I met a guy on the street and he told me that I should come here. I know, that it's strange, but that's the truth" It wasn't the truth. Really Argoh told her about them, but she shouldn't tell about him. " So, this guy told me that I should tell you about some Radiant" Sara continued "and you will know, what it is" Quote I'm not sure how to make dialogues, here, we have - except of " 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Sorana Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 4 minutes ago, Emi said: I'm not sure how to make dialogues, here, we have - except of " Quote Your dialogues look perfectly fine, don't worry about it! And I have to admit I have never heard of - being used instead of ", that's fascinating. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emi Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 1 minute ago, Sorana said: Your dialogues look perfectly fine, don't worry about it! Quote Thanks! I've read some books in english, but I just wanted to make sure 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AonEne Posted May 5, 2020 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 (edited) 1 hour ago, Emi said: " So, this guy told me that I should tell you about some Radiant" Sara continued "and you will know, what it is" “Don’t worry about it sounding strange, people do try to spread the word to newbies,” Cassie promised, moving out of the doorway to allow the girl in. “We get new people here fairly often. I’m Cassie - one of the Radiants that man mentioned. Have you seen anything weird recently, or done something that didn’t make sense, or been attacked?” Edited May 5, 2020 by AonEne 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Sorana Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 (edited) 1 hour ago, Emi said: Thanks! I've read some books in english, but I just wanted to make sure Quote I know about that feeling, and it's great you asked. Sometimes I feel as if a word belongs somewhere, but then I start questioning myself and in the end change the whole sentence, because it feels awkward to ask "can I use that, or does it change the meaning I try to convey" Edited May 5, 2020 by Sorana 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AonEne Posted May 5, 2020 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 Quote You can PM it to me if you ever want to ask I won’t judge. (Really, I have no idea how you guys are smart enough to remember multiple languages. It boggles my mind that there are people out there who can do this. You’re amazing, both of you) 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emi Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 (edited) 48 minutes ago, AonEne said: You can PM it to me if you ever want to ask I won’t judge. Quote What is PM? 48 minutes ago, AonEne said: Really, I have no idea how you guys are smart enough to remember multiple languages. It boggles my mind that there are people out there who can do this. You’re amazing, both of you Quote Thank you! I've attended to English preschool and now I'm in Warsaw Bilingual school. Because you are from america, you don't need to know any language so good. If I were you I also wouldn't put emhasis on any language. It's not nessesary, if everybody knows your language And Google translate also helps (sometimes) Edited May 5, 2020 by Emi 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AonEne Posted May 5, 2020 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 16 minutes ago, Emi said: What is PM? It's not nessesary, if everybody knows your language Quote Personal Message, it’s just the private messages. That is true. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Sorana Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 38 minutes ago, Emi said: I've attended to English preschool and now I'm in Warsaw Bilingual school. Because you are from america, you don't need to know any language so good. If I were you I also wouldn't put emhasis on any language. It's not nessesary, if everybody knows your language Quote Someone else living in my timezone! Warsaw is such a beautiful city, I've only been there once and not for a long while, but I remember how impressed I was. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emi Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 (edited) Quote Warsaw is such a beautiful city, I've only been there once and not for a long while, but I remember how impressed I was. Quote Thanks! Though, I think, that Krakow is much better Edited May 5, 2020 by Emi I tried to changed this and my language changed into Polish 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emi Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 (edited) 1 hour ago, Sorana said: Someone else living in my timezone! yayyyy Edited May 5, 2020 by Emi Here too 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Sorana Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 37 minutes ago, Emi said: Thank you! Though, I think that Krakow is much nicer Quote Haven't been there yet, but it's on my list of places to visit. And sorry if it appears to be nitpicking, but please try to avoid double posting, it's nothing the mods like to see. No need to worry about it now, but just keep it in mind for the future. If you want to quote several different things, you can place the boxes beneath each other in your post. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 On 5/4/2020 at 10:17 AM, Sorana said: "Just start at the beginning!" Shana rolled her eyes at this attempt to buy time. "It can't be that hard? Just tell us what you know and be done with it." She shot an apologetic look at Everest when she realized that she had intruded in his interrogation after all. But it was just so annoying, so nervewrecking to listen to this Voidbringer, to see him smile and make fun of them. Annoying and incredibly dangerous. If it continued like that, she might loose her temper after all. Taking a deep breath she calmed herself, pictured a flame burning happily without any wind stiring it, without too much food making it grow higher and higher, stronger and faster. "This can be over soon if you cooperate." she added, although she had no real idea what they would do, when it was over. Kill him probably, as they had killed them all so far. There wasn't anything else they could do - except. Her eyes remained on him when a throught struck her again. Maybe there was a cure, a way to solve this without fighting and killing. And maybe they had found somebody who knew how to do it. @The_Archivist ============== "I'm willing to cooperate," said Sheln, shrugging, "but if you want specific answers, you'll need to ask specific questions." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Archivist Posted May 5, 2020 Report Share Posted May 5, 2020 (edited) On 4.5.2020 at 5:17 PM, Sorana said: "Just start at the beginning!" Shana rolled her eyes at this attempt to buy time. "It can't be that hard? Just tell us what you know and be done with it." Everest wanted to sigh. He agreed with the sentiment, but this was not strenthening their position. 45 minutes ago, xinoehp512 said: "I'm willing to cooperate," said Sheln, shrugging, "but if you want specific answers, you'll need to ask specific questions." "What are your, as in the enlightened's, plans?" And if that wasn't clear enough for you, then so help me, I will finally snap and kill you. Quote Did you figure out the Voidbringer's motives? @xinoehp512 @Sorana Edited May 5, 2020 by The_Archivist 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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