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All contents of this post exist before the era 5 timeline shift. So, if you're here for the scrap city plot, please go to page 17 to see it's beginning.

Dusk returned from his field trip. The tower was done. As a matter of fact, the 50 meter tall wall around the base was done to. The lifless had also set up several thousand tents and  sheds across the top, and had started turning the watchtower into more of a castle. Maybe telling them, "Finish this place" was to unclear of an instruction? Well it worked. It looked an awful lot like a city, actually. The fiend returned. Dusk saw an eagle fly away from the docking release hatch. No matter. He had the lifeless remove the cannon and set it up over the watchtower, on a support system. It would be an anti-massive-over-powered-walker gun. He called the precursors, and told them that they were to police his city. Free labor is always nice. He posted an add on the Alleyzon add service. Citizens Wanted. He  waited a bit, and had a large group of civilians at his door in a week. The citadel city was officially open!


 

 

Hello! This is where all the Great game stuff will continue. It is a small city, and has a large amount of ores, and other resources coming out of it for commerce. Soon it will be  massive interlocking multi floored city, but for now it is a very large town. Come and enjoy our massive bar, hotel, park, and stuffs. The admission test is below.

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Admission Test:

ARE YOU HELLBENT: YES/NO

DO YOU WORK FOR HELLBENT: YES/NO

DO YOU HAVE ANY INTENT TO DESTROY ANY OF THE CITY, OR COMMIT ANY CRIMES: YES/NO

DO YOU WORK FOR THE JACKAL: YES/NO

If you answered yes to either of these questions, you are not allowed inside.

Exposition Groups

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If you are here to pursue a criminal from another territory, contact Dusk. There will not be a group of 6 or more people allowed to hunt the criminal, unless Dusk is hunting them as well. He retains the right to withhold rights for certain hunters, though he does not reserve the right to not allow a criminal to be pursued.

Citadel Construction Log

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Entry 1

The temporary holding cells have been repaired. The wall has been raised another fifty meters. The whiper cell tree has grown enough that whiper relay stations have been placed around the perimeter, to stop any teleporters from getting in. The Weather, and Anti-Alleymatic trees have started. They are currently much to small to be of use, but in a while will be large enough to crete blanket effects. The tents have been replaced with semitericical huts, and construction of stone houses has begun. The mines have been expanded. The Fiend has been moved into the mines, and is now creating a complex tunnel system. The tower is now 300 meters tall and has a 75 meter perimeter. The cannon on top is being supported by a multitude of steel construction supports. The Precursor station is complete, for now.

Entry 2

The wall has been raised another fifty meters, and now stands 150 meters tall. The whiper net can disable epic powers across the entire city and it has a permanent teleportation block. The weather control, and anti alleymatic cell trees are now large enough to create 100 square meters of weather, or alleymatics less areas. The Breadmunks have escaped. Almost all huts have been made into stone houses, and many more houses have been added. The tower has expanded to be 500 meters tall, and 100 meters in diameter, with four smaller 100 meters by 15 meter towers around it. The mines now have a network of mine rails, and minecarts through out them, and a influx of new workers have come to mine. The resident Koloss clan has expanded slightly, and the drillers are in full functionality. The Fiend has been fully demilitarized. The cannon has been lifted to fit the tower's height, which increases it's range, and it has it's own power core of electricity aons, set to self destruct if tampered with. No this would not destroy the gun. Also, a ring of twenty exterior watchtowers have been set up 800 meters out from the city itself, manned, and with their own motivators. AA guns have been put through the area around, and in, the city, and hangers have been constructed to hold planes, military and shipping alike.

Entry 3

The wall now stands at 200 meters tall and is 20 meters thick. The weather control and anti alleymatic motivators can now affect the entire city, with accuracy of 50 meters. The whiper relays have been spread throughout the city so any section can disable epic powers at any time. The shield as been supported to be able to stop a class 7 investiture bomb. The breadmunks have taken up permanent residence in the fields and trees surrounding the citadel. All huts have been turned into stone and almost all space as been filled. The first two story houses have begun construction. The tower is now 1,000 meters tall and 250 meters in diameter. The smaller towers have been made into 300 meters tall, and 75 meters in diameter, with several connectors going in between them and the main tower. The twenty exterior watchtowers have been fully set up, with a diameter of 50 meters and a height of 200. They each have their own miniature cannon on top. The cannon is now fully supported by the tower. The mines have gone down 3,000 meters, and have a lot of bridges throughout them. Now hundreds of tons metal are mined every month. The road to Alleycity has been begun.

Entry 4

The wall now stands 300 meters tall and is 25 meters thick. The motivators can now affect the city with a accuracy of 40 meters. The shield can now stop, with a large amount of strain, a class 8 investiture bomb. The Breadmunks have spread further. The tower is now 1,250 and 300 meters in diameter. The smaller towers are now 400 by 100 meters and the connectors between them have been expanded, and have had roofs put on them. The twenty exterior towers have been completed with a diameter of 75 and a height of 250, and their cannons are fully operational. The main cannon is now able to turn slowly with a targeting system. The mines have a complex system of bridges and mine rails and it outputs 10 tons per week. The mines are now also 4,000 meters deep. The deep la as ben suspended in the mines, and Dusk is now doing all of his most sensitive experiments there.

Entry 5/timeskip recap.

The Wall has been finished at 2,000 meters tall, and 750 meters thick. The Motivators can hit with an accuracy of 1 meter. The shield can now stop a class 10 investiture bomb, without blowing out. The breadmunks appear to have evolved and now live several hundred kilometer out from the Citadel. The tower is now 5,000 meters tall and 1,200 in diameter. The smaller towers aren now 4,000 meters by 900 meters. The bridges in stone are now complete and interlock between all the towers. The twenty exterior towers have been expanded to 500 meters by 150 meters, and their cannons are bigger. The main cannon can move faster and hit harder. All space has been occupied and and their are several towers. The city has been altered so now there are multiple floors with bridges over the others. Like corcuasant but smaller. The mines are now incredibly deep and expansive and output thousands of tons of metal, rock, and gemstones every week. A large amount of people have taken to living in in the mines in a complex hut and bridge system. The Precursor station is now a 750 meter tall tower that is 150 metes in diameter, and holds several hundred Precursors, and administers all the other stations.

Entry 6

The entire city is now a series of two story houses and bridges. The motivators can hit with an accuracy of 75 centimeters. The web of houses in the mines is now several dozen stories down and is growing randomly, as people just build in it. The Mines are deeper, and many branch off mines have been made. Their is now a factory in the far west side of the city, as the houses were rendered uninhabitable in a fire fight between Capone and the Precursors. A Series of massive warehouses have been made beyond the wall, and have there own 250 meter tall inclosure. On the east and south sides several undred saplings have been planted, and growth fabrials have been spread throughout the area.

Public Dusk Experiments

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Motivator Tree: Despite it's name, this is not a tree. It operates under the idea that, since motivators are cell cultures, you can make the cell culture grow. Therefore, if you make a cell culture grow, you then have an infinite supply of motivators. This process is incredibly slow, but it's speed increases exponentially.

Anti Alleymatics: This is caused using a motivator of an epic who can manipulate brain functions. This motivator is incredibly weak, and only allows for basic limitations, but it does do the same thing as a high power electromagnetic signature, stopping higher brain functions, like those required for Alleymatics, without the imminent death draw back.

Breadmunks: This is the experiment that Dusk is currently working on, which combines spirit web manipulation, with gene changes, to try and cause chipmunks to hybridise with bread, and gain intelligence, to become a noble race of Breadmunks. They escaped into the neighboring hills, and are now an indigenous lifeform.

Breath Gemstone Stormlight Sequencing: This is the theory that if you were to awaken a gemstone to produce investiture and stormlight it would provide an unlimited amount of stormlight. It has not been tested, and Dusk does not believe it will work, but it is a theory that exists in the Citadel Scientific community. Failure.

Misting Motivators: This chi the theory that if you take a bit of misting DNA and charge it with stormlight, or another form of investiture, it will burn metal, and function as if it is still attached to a misting. It has not been tested.

Larkin Hybridization: This is a project tha Dusk has been working on to mix Larkins with apes using advanced scientific procedures, in an attempt to make an ape that can eat investiture. It is currently in very early testing.

Citadel Code of Laws

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Assault

Assault, defined as causing intentional harm without being threatened to a individual, or group. Charged with written warning at first offense, 1 month for second, and 6 for all future offenses, until a ten year period passes from the most recent offense.

 

 

Harassment

Defined as causing distress, or difficulty for an individual, or group. Charged with verbal warning for first offense, with a recording of events, a written warning for second offense, and 1 month for third and all future events for 3 years after most recent offense.

 

Murder

Murder is defined as killing another person with intent. Insanity plea is allowed. Charged with 20 years for first offense, life for second, and execution for third. Third offense classifies as a high crime and the insanity plea is no longer applied.

 

Vandalism

Defined as destruction of property, with any means, intentionally. Several subtypes.

Destruction of Personal Property: Destroying a personal object of an individual. Charged with replacement of destroyed object, or paying the amount the object was worth.

Destruction of Public Property: Defined as destroying an object of public statue, such as a statue, or public art. Charged with 6 months community service,

Destruction of Buildings: Defined as rendering a building unusable. Charged with 1 year on first offense, 4 years on second, and 12 years for third.

 

Theft

Defined as removal of property without permission from it’s owner. Depending on worth, financially and psychologically, time ranges from 1 month to 30 years.

 

Treason

Defined as any attempt to overthrow a governing body that one swears allegiance to. Charged with execution, and is a high crime.

 

Assassination

Defined as killing a person in a position of power. High crime, and charged with execution.

 

Insanity Plea

The insanity plea is when one gives the reason that they commited a crime to be a mental disorder. Allows them to escape capital punishment, and are released when the psychologist that they are assigned says that they are cured.

 

 

Extortion

Defined as giving someone false information in exchange for profit or service. Charged with all crimes the extorted committed, as well as an additional 3-20 years, depending on how much they profited.

 

Black mail

Defined as using information, or other forceful ways of persuasion to force someone to do something. Charged with 5-life depending on the blackmail, and how much they profited. The target of the blackmail is not charged, as long as the blackmail is not the fact that they commited a crime.

 

Attempted Murder

Defined as attempting to kill a person, but failing. Charged with 10 years for first violation, 40 for second attempt, and life for third.

 

Animal Abuse

Defined as harming an animal without cause. Charged with a written warning for first offense, 10 hours community service for the second, and 100 hours for third. All offenses after the first in a 1 year period of the most recent offense are also charged with relinquishment of the animal in question.

 

No Consensual Hemalurgy

Defined as giving someone a hemalurgic spike, or taking an attribute through hemalurgy, without the consent of the target. 25 years on first offense, 50 on second, and life for third. On the third offense any spikes put in your self will be removed.

 

Kidnapping

Defined as removing someone from their location, and holding them against their will. 5 ars on first offense, 15 year on second, and 45 years on the third offense.

 

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What time frame is this in?

 

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Wally stumbled into town

"This place seems groovy! Wonder if there is a house for sale?"

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A couple weeks after the final events of the Great game. Walker is dueling Lusk, and the Thieves are in the middle of their Alleyzon heist. It will stay modern though, which is why I didn't put an era two in the title. Dusk is now more of the scientist kind than an evil scientist bent on world domination now. Of course, he sees himself as the chief administrator, not king.

A lifeless guard walked over to the lizard man and guided him to the DJ hut.

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"You know this place needs?" Said Wally "Music!"

Wally places down his boom box and it starts playing Copacabana by Barry Manilow

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Dusk ran over and wacked the boombox out of his hands, "NO DISCO!"

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"Use one of these muscic in the Citadel. The score, All good things, Zayde Wolf, Imagine Dragons, Fall out boy(I like some of their songs), thousand foot crutch, Hamilton, and Jaxson Gamble. Not disco!" Dusk said, "Unless I'm not here. Speaking of which, I probably should go watch my best friend's duel."

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"Fine I'll play it but I won't like it"

Wally switches the song to Warriors by Imagine Dragons

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A man, smilig eerily, walked up, holding a shardblade. "Hello. I'm notHellbent."

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1 minute ago, Ookla the Dragon Reborn said:

A man, smiling eerily, walked up, holding a shardblade. "Hello. I'm notHellbent."

"Hello," The sentinel said, "What is the purpose of your visit?" The precursors walked by him, and moved into the city.

1 hour ago, Ookla The Clyde said:

"Fine I'll play it but I won't like it"

Wally switches the song to Warriors by Imagine Dragons

"Good" Dusk said, before leaving to watch Walkers duel.

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He smiled eerily. "I've been told this is a city. I want to massacre everyone in it and hang them from the walls for the ravens to eat over the next week, then destroy the city in a blaze of fire live in the city, and kill everyone and everything interact with my knives, into others bodies neighbors!"

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Ark, I find this hilarious, but don't destroy my city. If you want to, please wait until we have enough time to get a real defence up.

"Well then, your welcome to live here. Remember, if you break the law, the precursors will arrest you and lock you in the citadel for all eternity. Have fun!"

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Don't kill anybody. Don't attack soldiers. Don't steal from people. Don't criticize the music. And finally, don't break the city. Those are pretty much the laws, that we have so far.

 

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A man walked up and frowned,

"Your music sucks" 

He ran away, chased by a horde of angry Setinels

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A tall, mysterious stranger appeared suddenly in the midst of the citadel, brandishing an illogical number of forks which he immediately began stabbing into the shins of anyone who wasn't a soldier, ensuring that each stab was nonlethal.

"I found a loophole! Apparently this isn't illegal!"

The man began giggling madly and continued running around the citadel stabbing shins.

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1 minute ago, Ookla the Benefactor said:

Precursors

 

2 minutes ago, Ookla the Lurker said:

A tall, mysterious stranger appeared suddenly in the midst of the citadel, brandishing an illogical number of forks which he immediately began stabbing into the shins of anyone who wasn't a soldier, ensuring that each stab was nonlethal.

"I found a loophole! Apparently this isn't illegal!"

The man began giggling madly and continued running around the citadel stabbing shins.

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So many upvotes. So many upvotes.

 

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The man came back, his hair now on fire for no reason. He held up a 20 foot tall speaker grid and played "The Rubberband Man" by The Spinners with his toes. No one knew how, as he had no insturment, and still wearing shoes.

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Dusk came back, punched this man in the face, added anti assault laws, and left again.

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The mysterious stranger immediately stopped stabbing peoples shins. He sat on the ground and pondered a moment before jumping up in glee.

He swapped his forks out for psi-forks, which would cause all the pain of having been stabbed with a fork, with none of the physical injury, and would not fall under the definition of assault as being defined as the application or threat of inflicting bodily harm on another.

He once more set about around him, stabbing people in the shins with his psi-forks.

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The man smiled, stepping into the Citadel. "Are you ready to die in a blaze of balefire and never return? make friends? I'm a generally murderous and insane nice person!" He smiled, then went into the city, enslaving citizens, because that wasn't illegal.

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2 hours ago, Ookla the Dragon Reborn said:

The man smiled, stepping into the Citadel. "Are you ready to die in a blaze of balefire and never return? make friends? I'm a generally murderous and insane nice person!" He smiled, then went into the city, enslaving citizens, because that wasn't illegal.

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How are you enslaving them without assaulting them?

Dusk returned, made Slavery illegal, and kicked out anyone with slaves. He also made harassment illegal, and gave Thel executive power. He then went to the watchtower and started drafting a code of laws.

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"That's groovy and all but am I allowed to dance like disco music is playing?"

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Sorry. As an Alleyverse moderator I'm shutting down this thread...:P

 

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I was Voidus.:ph34r:

 

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