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  • 5 months later...
53 minutes ago, Ghanderflaffle said:

Based on pronunciations, according to me that is 6-7-5 ;)

 

Why only Roshar?

Come, let's do some Mistborn too

Vin is really neat.

How do you pronounce it :huh:? I say Say-deez. 


You make a fair point.

I’ll branch out to other worlds,

friend Ghanderflaffle.

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On 10/17/2020 at 6:13 PM, Rosharan A.C. said:

Sadeas ate chull dung.

Ha ha ha ha ha ha, ha

ha ha, ha. Chull dung.

Not so sure about the haiku part, but now I am reading this with the theme music for the 1960s TV version of "Batman"

Sadeas: (Eats bread, drinks soup, makes face) Ugh. Hey, Horneater! What'd you spice all this stuff with?

Rock: Chull Dung! Chull Dung! Ha-ha-ha-ha, ha-ha-ha-ha, Chull Dung!

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(I was inspired by the great haikus on this thread, so I decided to write my very first one and ended up with 3. If any of the more experienced Sharders have any feedback on my haiku-writing it's more than welcomed)

 

Face to face with pain

I choose life instead of death.

A piece of God's touch.

 

I look for my strenght

Weakness is the eassy way.

Cracks filled with God's oath.

 

The journey greets me

No sense skipping to the end.

My soul is Honor.

 

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8 hours ago, Shardsplinter said:

Face to face with pain

I choose life instead of death.

A piece of God's touch.

 

I look for my strenght

Weakness is the eassy way.

Cracks filled with God's oath.

 

The journey greets me

No sense skipping to the end.

My soul is Honor.

 

Very good! I like them a lot. I'm really no expert, but I think your haiku's are very poetic. 

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3 hours ago, Voidspawn said:

Radiants eat food

Lift eats more than all of them

Yet low nutrition

 

3 hours ago, Voidspawn said:

Dustbringers are the

greatest of the Radiants

Make Voidbringers dust

Those are good! I like the first one a lot :P.

Just a reminder though, the mods prefer that we don’t post right twice or more in a row. If you want to say something else, you can always add it by editing. :D

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oh, I have some really good old ones! 

English isn't my first language and I kind of struggle with counting syllables in it, so corrections are welcome

 

he stole himself, it's
what thieves do; jester, drifter,
smoke after fire

a man in the crowd
many faces, many names
he saw God’s demise

the one abandoned
tragically late, stumbles
next to city's gate

a journey must have
a beginning, so walk on
from thorns life will rise

 

Edit: thought about some new ones

BIG ROW SPOILERS, BE WARNED!

Spoiler

spirit stands uncrushed
with more time to create, she
sings and brings the light

Warbreaker spoilers

Spoiler

fur and feather torn
our foolish trust misplaced, they
told us all along

 

 

(seriously that part of warbreaker gave me fictional-trust issues gfdsgfs)

born unto pure light
a man that we can trust, he
only stabs the jerks

Edited by LiftIRL
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