Zath Posted April 28, 2018 Report Share Posted April 28, 2018 This is a short story that I wrote as an introduction to Allomancy and the Final Empire for the Mistborn Adventure Game. It's targeted towards people who have never read the books, so I tried to explain the setting and magic system in a way that would make some sense to a newcomer. Of course, those explanations are limited to in-world knowledge of how everything works, so there are a few... MacGuffins, or red herrings, or whatever you want to call it. I'd appreciate any feedback you have for me, and I hope you enjoy it! (It's about 17 pages long and 8,500 words, give or take). Fair warning: if this were a film, it would be rated PG-13 for violence (about the same level of violence as the novels, in my opinion). There's no sexual content or vulgarity or anything like that.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VfcKTEw6Ti8shv_-KJEWzMHHnYbrHB7jUVgCeBaZh78/edit?usp=sharing 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaj Posted May 22, 2018 Report Share Posted May 22, 2018 This looks great. I thoroughly enjoyed it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kuiinteth of isaana Posted July 5, 2018 Report Share Posted July 5, 2018 old thread, but this is actually pretty well written 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zath Posted July 6, 2018 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2018 Thanks, Kaj and kuiinteth! I'm glad you liked it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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