overlord stick Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Stick simply stood in the background, utterly confused. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Jaywalk stepped away, watching the kids hug their father; mother and brother hug the sister. It would have to end soon. ”Whenever you’re ready.” @Shard of Thought 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Give me a moment, Star thought to Pheonix. She hugged Marsh again. Everything would be alright. "Don't worry about me," Star said. "You deserve this. I love you." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 “I love you too.” The beam of light came down again, enveloping Marsh. When it dispersed, he was gone again, back to the Beyond. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Thanks, Jay. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 It’s over. I can breathe... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Well, Xino has something, so I wouldn't breathe just yet. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turtle373 Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Butt's Henchmen had already collected 12 of the finite rocks, they were close to becoming slightly more powerful than they were before. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Pheonix opened his mind to Star. It was lonely, being a Narrator. The only company you had was what you created yourself. And he'd gotten tired of that a long time ago. He hadn't really been around for very long. But it seemed like an eternity. He saw the other Narrators together, sometimes. Sometimes, he was even included in what they were doing. But he always felt like he was an outsider, like none of them really knew him. He couldn't converse the same way they did. He could Narrate, sure. He could add to the story. But the mysteries of 'small talk' had always evaded him. In his darkest moments, he'd considered giving up entirely. Erasing the character Narrator Pheonix and just letting the Narrative energy do its own thing. But he never did. And that was because of Star. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 1 minute ago, xinoehp512 said: Pheonix opened his mind to Star. It was lonely, being a Narrator. The only company you had was what you created yourself. And he'd gotten tired of that a long time ago. He hadn't really been around for very long. But it seemed like an eternity. He saw the other Narrators together, sometimes. Sometimes, he was even included in what they were doing. But he always felt like he was an outsider, like none of them really knew him. He couldn't converse the same way they did. He could Narrate, sure. He could add to the story. But the mysteries of 'small talk' had always evaded him. In his darkest moments, he'd considered giving up entirely. Erasing the character Narrator Pheonix and just letting the Narrative energy do its own thing. But he never did. And that was because of Star. Star smiled. So what is it that you want? 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Jaywalk waited until the families dispersed, then sent Edna back as well. Jasnah had tears in her eyes. Max put his arm around her in comfort. “It’s okay, Mom. She’s okay.” Kelsier embraced them both. With their father gone, Rose and Granite ran to their mother, but it seemed she was busy. They waited. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Narrator Pheonix looked down at his feet. "I want to know someone cares," he whispered. "That if I vanished from this world right now, someone would remember me. Someone would miss me." 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Just now, xinoehp512 said: Narrator Pheonix looked down at his feet. "I want to know someone cares," he whispered. "That if I vanished from this world right now, someone would remember me. Someone would miss me." "I know I would. Look at all the stories we've created. Fallen, Queen of Shadows, Reborn, Zeoy and the Mimes. What would I do without your creativity?" 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Narrator Pheonix smiled, feeling warmth and happiness surge through him. "Thank you," he said, looking her directly in the eyes. "That means a lot to me." 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 “That, Star,” Jaywalk said. “Is why the Narrators should be equal. Stories only achieve their full potential when we work together in harmony.” 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Just now, xinoehp512 said: Narrator Pheonix smiled, feeling warmth and happiness surge through him. "Thank you," he said, looking her directly in the eyes. "That means a lot to me." Star brightened. "I'm glad I could do something right." Just now, Jaywalk said: “That, Star,” Jaywalk said. “Is why the Narrators should be equal. Stories only achieve their full potential when we work together in harmony.” She paled, hanging her head. "Yes. I'm sorry." 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Just now, Shard of Thought said: She paled, hanging her head. "Yes. I'm sorry." “You’re forgiven.” He held his hand out to Pheonix. “Brother.” 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Pheonix shook his hand. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Star eyed Pheonix. There was more in there. Things unsaid. She smiled to herself. If he wanted her, then he would take her himself. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xinoehp512 Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 And thus, the plot thickens. Will conflict with TLPW wreak havoc with interNarrator relationships? Will Pheonix work up the courage to tell Star how he feels? And what are those mimes up to, anyways? Come back during the next time we have a meta-plot to see! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 So, in a couple weeks. Butt Venture had a dilemma. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Honestly, a relationship between two Narrators would be pretty storming awesome. Two super overpowered beings who love each other. And it's especially cute that Pheonix would be shy about it. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaywalk Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 And I remain Master of the Void. I’m all for it. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephrun’s Imperium Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 (edited) It would be really run to draw all of us. I definitely want to try Pheonix again, full body. Anything you want specifically, Jay? I have a few things in mind. Edited May 8, 2019 by Shard of Thought 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthless of Shinovar Posted May 8, 2019 Report Share Posted May 8, 2019 Butt's henchmen were gone, and his was worried about them. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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