Comatose

Ati and Leras [Mistborn Era 1 and Secret History Spoilers][Mild OB Spoilers]

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Daaaang, Coma. That was awesome. Great story!

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Thanks folks!  I appreciate the comments.  It was really fun to write :). 

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wow... that was well done! felt like reading real sanderson at some points

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That is an enormous compliment!  Thanks Nohadon!

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this is beautiful... I really love the idea of shards motivations being fleshed out this way. I had assumed that 

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I can't believe I've never noticed this before. 

Those last few paragraphs were beautiful. This being the moment you actually brought tears to my eyes

On 04/03/2018 at 1:21 AM, Comatose said:

I would rather see the Cosmere consumed by your power then spend eons apart from you

Good stuff dude

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2 hours ago, Unlicensed Hemalurgist said:

I ship it.

I second this. 

 

@Comatose, amazing work, I loved reading this. Your writing style is amazing... this is basically art.

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I never thought I would ship Ati and Leras until now!

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Aaaw, thanks folks!

Glad to see the cult of Lerti/Atras is growing in converts :)

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12 minutes ago, Comatose said:

Aaaw, thanks folks!

Glad to see the cult of Lerti/Atras is growing in converts :)

Clearly Atras is the superior name.

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It's like Romeo and Juliet: 

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"Two Shards, both alike in dignity,

On fair Scadrial, where we lay our scene,

From ancient oppositions break to new mutiny,

Where ash and blood makes mortal hands unclean.

And bearing the Intents of these two Shards

A pair of star-cross’d lovers give their life;

Whose misadventur’d piteous overthrows

Doth with their death bury their Shardic strife.

The fearful passage of their piebald love,

And the continuance of the Cosmere's rage,

Which, but their Vessels' ends, nought could remove,

Is now the two hours’ traffic of our stage;

The which if you with patient ears attend,

What here shall miss, young Harmony strives to mend."

 

 

Edited by Unlicensed Hemalurgist
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All the tears.  Mad claps.  

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Oh my your fic made my day! Thanks so much for writing it XD

On 2018/9/17 at 1:55 AM, Unlicensed Hemalurgist said:

I ship it.

I’ve secretly been on this ship for quite a while! Time to step out of the darkness...

And there is something from a tumblr emoji request. I regret nothing :P

(Don’t open it unless you ship it.)

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On 9/17/2018 at 2:54 PM, Unlicensed Hemalurgist said:

It's like Romeo and Juliet: 

 

Can you do Shakespeare for the SA by other authors board? Or just post that... it’s awesome!

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On 2018-09-19 at 5:28 PM, Botanica said:

Oh my your fic made my day! Thanks so much for writing it XD

I’ve secretly been on this ship for quite a while! Time to step out of the darkness...

And there is something from a tumblr emoji request. I regret nothing :P

(Don’t open it unless you ship it.)

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@Botanica you are a hero!!!  This is fantastic.  Would not be opposed to more Ati/Leras art in the future :)    So in love with this!!!

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This story is one of the best Sanderson fan works I've ever seen.

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DamnSon,  that was amazing. Love it 

 

Also maybe u could add that Leras felt it unfair or miserable or jealous that honor and cultivation got to be together with no hindrance.

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A little polishing
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I am at a loss for words.

Congratulations, Comatose, this is darned impressive.

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On 23/03/2020 at 7:33 AM, PrinceGenocide said:

DamnSon,  that was amazing. Love it 

 

Also maybe u could add that Leras felt it unfair or miserable or jealous that honor and cultivation got to be together with no hindrance.

 

On 23/03/2020 at 9:39 AM, Channelknight Fadran said:

I am at a loss for words.

Congratulations, Comatose, this is darned impressive.

Thanks both for the kind words!  

I tried to be specifically vague about the other Shards aside from a few small details at the beginning, but a jealousy about Honor and Cultivation would definitely be interesting to explore, if Leras was even aware of it. 

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