Murasaki Posted April 28, 2016 Report Share Posted April 28, 2016 So for a few years I've been developing stories, narratives, worlds, and characters. The genre, I'm supposing could be called Deaf Fantasy. Many characters are Deaf and much dialogue occurs in a manual language. Elements of Deaf culture are pervasive. It's vital that I get this story out and represent Deaf and Hard of Hearing culture in Fantasy. I'm passionate. Now, I finally have a second draft done. As I'm going through working on my third draft, I am finding that it's time for some input, advice, and encouragement. So here's a prologue. https://sakimarieharp.com/portfolio/a-prologue/ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Joe in the Bush Posted April 28, 2016 Report Share Posted April 28, 2016 I like what I read. I especially like that you never say she's deaf. It's subtly obvious throughout the prologue, but you never outright say she can't hear things. I also enjoy the two characters you've done a great time showing who they are. I personally would enjoy reading further chapters. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delightful Posted April 30, 2016 Report Share Posted April 30, 2016 Colour me intrigued. I would love to read more of this. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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