rdpulfer Posted April 18, 2016 Report Share Posted April 18, 2016 I wish people would quit writing so much so I could catch up! Anyway, here are my thoughts: - I really like how Granny Jane defuses the tension in the room about charity and favors with desert. - By the time you see a snatcher, it's already too late. I like this. It makes them sound like a force of nature, like a tornado or something. - Eight chapters in, I can't help but feel there's been enough detail on what exactly a snatcher is. It takes people I guess? What does it do with them? Why does the snatcher seem to have human memories? It's a very interesting concept, but I feel like the pace is perhaps moving too languid. - Cool to see the snatcher finally arrive, and I like how we still don't see too much of him to break the mystery. - Very interested to see what this new character is, snatcher or not. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krystalynn03 Posted April 20, 2016 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2016 Hi rdpulfer! Having too much to keep up on seems like a good problem for the board to have! Lots of creative juices flowing this April, I guess. Thanks for letting me know which parts worked and what didn't. I've asked about pacing every week, but I guess what I meant wasn't the pacing of each chapter, but the pacing of getting to chapter eight, which is exactly what you gave me feedback on. Thanks. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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