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The Bookwyrm

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Ever since I became invested in the Cosmere (yes, the pun was intended), I have toyed with the idea of writing my own connected universe akin to Brandon Sanderson's. 

As a writer, I am very good at worldbuilding, and can usually come up with interesting ideas for stories and the places that those stories would happen on. But I am no good at actually writing a coherent plot with interesting characters. I usually just write a few chapters of a story and then abandon it because I can't think of what to write next.

Anyway, over time I've had many ideas for stories, and some of these ideas became ideas that I could fit into a connected universe. I have always liked the idea of a story based around dragons, because I like dragons, but dragons that have capabilities for interstellar travel. When I combined this idea with some of the other ones that I'd had, I was able to make a very rough outline for some kind of connected universe, akin to the Cosmere.

Here is the rough overview of this Connected Universe. (Note that this is basically just copied and pasted from a google doc that has all my notes.)

Overview

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History

Dragons and humans, (And possibly other intelligent beings?) come to live on their own respective worlds. In the distant past, before written history, these people spread across the galaxy (universe?) by methods unknown. I may also have it so that humans evolve independently on different planets, so that they are still the exact same species, (or at least similar ones) while still having no actual relations. The same with the dragons, where different dragons come to live independently on different worlds. Suffice it to say, humans and dragons end up on many different planets in the distant past. This prehistoric scattering sets the stage for the origins of the story.

Certain dragons are destined to bond with certain humans, and this bond results in powerful magic. Some dragons and humans have magic on their own, though, without needing a bond, though in some places this latent magic is suppressed. Dragons, feeling the need to bond with these humans who live on distant worlds, use their powers to open portals to other planets.

On some worlds, the dragons are welcomed with open arms. The magic and power they bring is accepted gratefully, and the cultures of both the humans and the dragons on that world grow together. Other worlds see the dragons as monsters and kidnappers, accusing them of taking their families. Earth was one of these worlds, though different cultures on Earth saw the dragons in different lights.

While Earth and some other planets closed themselves off from the dragons, the ones that accepted them became part of an interstellar society. Cultures moved and were influenced, and entire populations moved between worlds. This interstellar society lasted for several millennia, and almost all of the cultures were still in a “medieval” period in technology.

However, this period could not last. There are evil dragons, and they take advantage of the passages between worlds to take control of people, riches, and power. Some worlds are kept safe, due to the armies of warriors and magic users, both human and dragon, that formed on their worlds, but others are left helpless to the war that spread across the connected planets. Eventually, those in charge (still working on who “those in charge” is) saw the need to simultaneously cut off all interstellar portals at once. 

Every world was isolated at once. Without the interstellar mixing and growing of cultures, each world ended up going in the direction they were headed when the portals closed. The dragons of certain worlds evolved slightly to easier fit the planet they had been trapped on. Many ages passed, so that the time of an interstellar community became history, then legend, until few on any world remembered that there were other ones.

The stories begin, generally, at the time where these portals begin to open. The “ones in charge” see that the evil dragons, who were imprisoned on a few select worlds, may be close to breaking loose. They want to try to re-unify the isolated planets so that they are able to face what is coming.

Things to Work Out

Do I want there to be gods in this universe? Brandon Sanderson does some cool things with them in his, considering they’re the basis of his entire story. I can see ways to incorporate them into the story, but if I leave them out, then the story will probably turn out fine anyway.

Other intelligent life? Dragons naturally want to bond with humans who they are destined to bond with. If I added other intelligent species, how would they fit into this pattern? Would they also bond with Dragons? Would they have their own thing to bond to? Would they not bond with anything? These are questions that I still need to work on.

And here are the summaries of some stories that would take place in this connected universe.

Northern Seas

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Northern Seas takes place on a planet that consists of a single large continent in the southern hemisphere, with the rest of the planet covered in one gigantic ocean that covers all of the northern hemisphere and some of the south. 

The Southern Kingdom, which is the primary country that calls the southern continent home, is generally more civilized. They are more based on the “medieval europe” trope that a lot of fantasy is based on. The royal families often have golden eyes.

The Northern Seas are a more wild and untamed area. A people of their own kind have somewhat developed there. They are a genetic mix of the ancient natives of the islands dotting the Northern Seas and the first southern explorers who made their way there. The Northern Seas are now filled with traders, merchants, mercenaries, explorers, ambassadors from the south, and pirates, among many others. It is a place of opportunity, but also a place of danger.

To the far north are a tribe of people who are separate from anyone else on the planet. I am basing their culture on a mix of polynesian and native american cultures. These people are descendants of interstellar travelers during the era of connections between the worlds. They understand the history of their planet better than anyone else on it. They have light brown skin and greenish-blue eyes, generally.

There are two types of magic: Gifts and Arts. Gifts are a type of internal magic, one that gives the Given certain traits or enhancements that they can call upon when needed. For example, someone with the Gift of Strength can activate their gift to gain a burst of physical strength. Gifts can only be activated for a certain amount of time, though, and need to be “recharged” after a long usage.

Arts are a more traditional type of magic. I am still working out the details of it, but I think it may be based on air drawn runes and symbols. Arts are banned in the Southern Kingdom, because people used them in their past to do great evil. Each of the three main cultures of the planet have their own type of Arts.

The story centers around a young woman who is the cousin to the princess of the Southern Kingdom. Her father is the king’s younger brother, but her mother is actually from the far northern tribe. Her father once went traveling around the northern seas when he was young, which was how her parents met. Her mother, after falling in love with her father, traveled back with him to the Southern kingdoms.

This young woman is unique because of her eyes. One of them is gold, and one of them is blue-green. She has several Gifts, and is secretly being trained in the Arts of both the Far North and the South. She has a strong personality, and is always fond of adventure, though she also likes the formal setting that she grew up in. She enjoys the balls and the luncheons, which is uncommon for a character of her general trope.

For reasons that I still need to work out (which is not good, because these reasons would be plot-central) the main character is sent away to travel the Northern Seas. She has a guide, who is an old, experienced, and somewhat gruff woman who was a friend of her father during his travels. She eventually makes her way to the far north and meets the tribe that she takes half of her heritage from. She is eventually a catalyst for the opening of a portal that connects her world to another.

This planet is home to sea-serpent like creatures that descended from the dragons that first came there. They are fully intelligent and have their own undersea kingdom, hidden away from the rest of the world. Sometimes, people from the tribe in the Far North will form magical bonds with these serpents. The main character also forms a bond with one of them.

Drifter

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This story takes place on a world with no ground, a planet known as Drilea. I am imagining it as a small gas giant, though the gravity they feel is only slightly greater than that of Earth. The clouds of the planet are a yellowish color, though there are white water clouds in the upper atmosphere, where the floating islands are. The people of this planet live on these floating islands that drift in low orbits around the planet in the upper atmosphere. Some of them are small, only holding a single village, while others are large enough to be considered small continents. (Imagine ReDawn meets Skyward Sword.)

The dragon descendants on this planet are known as Drifters. They have huge wings and scales similar to the color of the clouds on Drilea. They are used to bring goods and people between the islands. However, only skilled and privileged people are allowed to bond with these Drifters, which becomes a plot point in the short story I started.

The magic for this book is called Windspeak, or Windspeaking. I don’t have much more about it than the name.

Earth Story

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This is a story that would take place on Earth, our planet, in our modern day and age. The general plot is that dragons are returning to Earth after the millennia of isolation that all the planets felt. Dragons have, of course, faded into myth on Earth, so their arrival is treated interestingly.

The main character (or at least one of them, that I have in my head) is a young teenage woman of about 17 or 18. She ends up getting pulled into the whole business with the arrival of the dragons, considering she is destined to bond with one of them. 

The governments of the world are trying to deal with the “invaders”, as the dragons are labeled by some. While some people want peace with them, trying to find a solution without bloodshed, other countries are more hostile to the dragons, and are willing to go to drastic measures to protect against what they believe are hostile invaders.

The main character(s) would probably be approached by a secret organization of one or more of the countries who are not hostile to the dragons, and are drawn into a conflict to prevent a war between humanity and the dragons.

In my head I have this as some kind of a spy thriller story, based around an otherworldly “invasion”, but the “invaders” are dragons.

(Something along those lines. Much of the plot of this is still being worked out in my head.)

Andromeda's Descendants

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This is based on the myth about Andromeda, who was captured by the sea monster Cetus, and the hero Perseus, who killed Cetus and saved Andromeda.

In reality, Cetus was a dragon who formed a bond with Andromeda, and Andromeda’s family was not pleased. They were among those on Earth who despised the dragons and saw them as monsters. Cetus was labeled as a kidnapper. Andromeda’s family asked Perseus to kill Cetus and “rescue” their daughter. But, in the end, Andromeda made the fully informed decision to leave Earth with her dragon. Perseus, who was eventually married to Andromeda, saw reason and went with her and Cetus to a distant world. Much of the mythology surrounding Andromeda and Perseus after Cetus’s supposed “death” was either based on information that traveled through a few sparse portals back to earth, or was completely fabricated.

 Over time, the legend became distorted enough that it was told so that Perseus did kill Cetus.

This story would take place many years later on a world where most of the people are descendants of Andromeda and Perseus. I don’t have much more than this.

That's basically it. What do you think? Comments, questions, suggestions? They're all welcome.

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this. is. beautiful. good sir, you've come up with this on your own? A masterpiece at work, here.

Do you have a name for this vast Universe?

(May I help author some bits, because I rly want to but if not that's fine)

You have inspired me to create my own connected universe. I had been thinking about it before, but hadn't really gone through with it.

I think I will though.

Sir, I thank you, I thank you and cannot wait to read these and see what you do.

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This could result in some very interesting stories. I didn't read all of it, so I don't know if you thought of this already. But what if there was an evil dragon who somehow forced a good human to bond with them. Maybe the human didn't realize the dragon was evil. Then the human realizes the evil the dragon wants to do and has to decide whether to become evil with the dragon or stop it. I like the idea of a universe where the dragons don't just live on one planet, but travel between multiple, though.

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On 5/21/2022 at 3:30 PM, The Bookwyrm said:

Certain dragons are destined to bond with certain humans, and this bond results in powerful magic. Some dragons and humans have magic on their own, though, without needing a bond, though in some places this latent magic is suppressed.

Is it that all dragons/humans have magical power but it’s suppressed in some, or is that most dragons/humans don’t have magical power but some do and a subset of the ones who do are suppressed, or is it that it’s tied to a specific place and any dragon/human will have suppressed magic in those places? does suppression weaken the magic, or fully stop it? are human/dragon bonds weakened in those areas at all?

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I may also have it so that humans evolve independently on different planets, so that they are still the exact same species, (or at least similar ones) while still having no actual relations.

so, something cool you could do here to do different species is have those planets have vastly different climates/geography, and so humans evolve differently based on that. like, what would humans look like if our whole earth was water with scatterings of archipelagos, and seafood our primary food? so like similar species but adapted for different things. you could also do this with dragons, maybe even basing them off of different real-world animals (i see your lizard dragon and i raise you pigeon dragon :p).

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While Earth and some other planets closed themselves off from the dragons, the ones that accepted them became part of an interstellar society. Cultures moved and were influenced, and entire populations moved between worlds. This interstellar society lasted for several millennia, and almost all of the cultures were still in a “medieval” period in technology.

ooooh so is interplanetary travel dependent on magic? sounds kinda dumb when i say it lol but the way you’ve set up magic in your worlds makes it really interesting.

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Every world was isolated at once.

oh oof lol

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Other intelligent life? Dragons naturally want to bond with humans who they are destined to bond with. If I added other intelligent species, how would they fit into this pattern? Would they also bond with Dragons? Would they have their own thing to bond to? Would they not bond with anything? These are questions that I still need to work on.

i mean there are a couple of different ways you could do this. one is to just make it so that dragons can bond to whatever sentient life there is, like you said. another could make it so that a different group of sentients could access a different form of magic that’s not dependent on dragons, and another is to make it so they’re just like the humans who don’t need a bond. they could also just not have magic, but that feels a bit boring tbh

oh and you could also just make them bond to the pigeon dragons :p.

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Do I want there to be gods in this universe? Brandon Sanderson does some cool things with them in his, considering they’re the basis of his entire story. I can see ways to incorporate them into the story, but if I leave them out, then the story will probably turn out fine anyway.

so something you need to consider abt gods that i think sanderson does particularly well is the fact that what ‘gods’ are actually there and what gods people see are two completely different things. like, in the cosmere, there’s the ‘god beyond’ which is apparently not a shard but still a god in the minds of the people who worship them, and then nobody’s really out there worshipping cultivation or devotion, who are both sort of gods. have fun with it! i bet you could make cultures who decide the dragons are gods, if you wanted to.

i have more to say but will say it later, this is super cool!

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@Turtle, a lot of the stuff I've put here is kind of outdated. My NaNoWriMo project takes place in this universe, and in brainstorming for it I've worked out a more concrete history, including the existence of beings that some worship as gods. And the idea of alternate forms of human evolution did come to my mind; there are a bunch of different..."subspecies" if you will, categorized under the same human species that we're a part of.

I wrote a whole mythology...I should probably post it here sometime.

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3 minutes ago, The Bookwyrm said:

@Turtle, a lot of the stuff I've put here is kind of outdated. My NaNoWriMo project takes place in this universe, and in brainstorming for it I've worked out a more concrete history, including the existence of beings that some worship as gods. And the idea of alternate forms of human evolution did come to my mind; there are a bunch of different..."subspecies" if you will, categorized under the same human species that we're a part of.

I wrote a whole mythology...I should probably post it here sometime.

yes pls it’s a super interesting idea!

(i wish i could do plot

but no no no just conlangs and maps and cultures and cities

no plot for me ig)

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Just now, Turtle said:

(i wish i could do plot

but no no no just conlangs and maps and cultures and cities

no plot for me ig)

This was me for the longest time. I only just layed out a very flimsy plot for my NaNoWriMo. I hope it works. I'm really, really good at worldbuilding, but then when it comes to writing stories in those worlds...well, that's another thing.

Anyway, here it is.

Mythology:

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In the beginning, there were two gods.

They were opposites, and embodied the fundamental aspect of existence itself. They were opposites: white and black, push and pull, light and dark, female and male. [As of yet unnamed.] Despite their vast differences, these two beings loved each other, and longed to create together. On their own, neither could do anything. Yet when they tried to combine their powers, they canceled each other out, leaving nothing but a void.

And so it was that the being of darkness sacrificed some of himself to his wife, the being of light. With that ever so slight imbalance, the first light came into the universe: energy that coalesced and formed everything that exists, including life.

These gods also sought to create those like them: ones who could think and create as they could. They had six children, in three pairs such as their parents had been, in order to create. 

Their work done, the two original gods faded. It is disputed among many who realize the true origins of existence whether or not they still exist.

The oldest pair of these children [As of yet unnamed] were granted stewardship over the universe. They governed the laws that allowed it to run and work. They had many children of their own, and while they had less power, their power was still enough that they could be considered gods in their own right. These beings, known as the Higher Ones, children of the Firsts, scattered across the universe their grandparents had created, and, under the direction of their parents, made it work and move. 

The second pair, known as the Seconds, were also given the mandate to create intelligent life. They birthed a race of beings known as the Wyrnal. The Wyrnal were in tune with the world around them, and were able to manipulate the power of the universe for their own purposes, an ability that would come to be known as “magic” and take many forms across the worlds and ages. They were a majestic race, proud and stalwart, and treated the worlds of the universe and the life in them with care and respect.

The Thirds created the last race of thinking beings, known now as the Walkers. They had access to magic as well, but used it in a different way. While the Walkers were not extravagantly strong, they were very intelligent. They created devices and technology, now lost to time, that paired with their magic and let them travel and spread across the worlds. They made friendships with the Wyrnal and the Higher Ones, and the universe entered an era of prosperity.

This lasted for untold millenia, stretching into eons. Conflicts did arise, but were quelled. It was peaceful [I may add gigantic swaths of history here. It’s a time filled with stories.] As the eons passed, the Wyrnal descended into many different races, as did the Walkers. The Wyrnalian races included many species, such as the Ystrill, but the primary among them were the Dragons. The Walkers also had many descendants, but the main ones among them were the Humans.

Yet the peace could not fully last. The children of the original gods made a mistake in their creation. They had forgotten that, as opposition existed in all things, such as their parent’s existence had taught them, creating too much light and joy would cause problems. Rather than create darkness and shadow and keep it under control, they had neglected. Now, in opposition to the light that ruled the universe, a being arose.

This being was one of darkness. It could not create by itself; rather, it took and corrupted what the Six had made. Sometimes this simply meant that normal creatures and worlds fell under its control, pledging service to it and following its commands. In other situations, it meant that entirely new beings and worlds came into existence, made from the fundamental basis of what the Six had created, but warped to a point that it was no longer recognizable.

A conflict began. It lasted many, many years. The Walkers and the Wyrnal completely vanished; it is unknown if they were wiped out completely, or if they sought refuge on remote worlds throughout the universe. Only their descendants remained, primarily among them the Dragons and the Humans.

Things were looking bleak. In a final gambit, the Higher Ones sacrificed a portion of their power to give the descendants of the Wyrnal and the Walkers a fighting chance. They forged a bond between the children of the Seconds and the Thirds. Wyrnalian beings and the Walker’s descendants could now form bonds under specific destined circumstances, a bond that gave them power beyond what was possible on their own. 

Using the power of this bond, the being was sealed away. In the wake of the war, many other races dwindled. In a tragic decision, the leaders of each race decided that the connection between worlds needed to be cut off to prevent the agents of the dark being from congregating again.

Beings of darkness were imprisoned on planets throughout the universe, then were sealed off. Contact stopped, and the universe entered a dark age.

Eons passed, though to some, it may only have been millenia. Connections occasionally popped up and vanished again. There was an unspoken agreement among some worlds and peoples to watch the prisons of the dark ones.

The Higher Ones nearly vanished altogether, at least from the sight of everyone else. They became figures of mythology and religion, and many who once knew the truth abandoned hope in them. Despite this, they never left, not fully.

After an untold amount of time, darkness began to stir again.

And yet, at the same time, dragons began to reach out. Having forgotten their shared past, they longed for bonds they had forgotten existed. Harnessing ancient magic, they reopened portals between the worlds.

This is where the story of the Wyrmworlds starts again.

 

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