Jump to content

Secret Project #3 preview typos


Recommended Posts

Quote

And he dis so,

 

Quote

It was difficult to maintain a properly brooding air after an encounter with the Akane.

 

Quote

 Don’t even ask about how she regarded calling a someone by their first name

Quote

I’ll admit to some pride regarding way Painter’s eyes. . .

Quote

She added a scoop soak up the rest of the broth,

Quote

But he suddenly, Painter found himself unnaturally tired.

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Quote

At the perimeter of the city, just in front of the shroud,, Painter folded his arms, confident. This was his realm. Here, he was the lone hunter. The solitary wanderer. The man who prowled the endless dark, unafraid of—

(Double comma)

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Chapter 2

Quote

“Warden-nimi,” Yumi said, gathering her courage. “The Festival of Reveals. It is near.”

Not sure... but "Revels" would make more sense.

Chapter 3

Quote

Then he shifted his bag to his back, feeling the weight of canvases and ink jar inside.

Should be "jars" plural, I'm guessing.

Quote

That fear was layered well beneath callouses of experience now.

Callous is an adjective; the noun is "calluses".

Quote

Then, with a sound very much like a sigh, it dispursed ...

"dispersed"

Chapter 5

Quote

And give me voluptuous curves, because they remind me of a graphed cosign.

It's "cosine".

Chapter 5 and 7

Quote

whisps of darkness curling off the stone ... the dark whisps seemed to vanish

Could be an intentional "alternate" spelling, but "wisp" is standard.

Chapter 7

Quote

what it might have been, if it hasn’t been produced by terror.

 

Edited by AquaRegia
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Quote

... looking a little like an series of overly large ...

Quote

... have to wait another year or more for another yoki-hijo ...

Repeated another sounds weird.

Quote

As I said, I said I owned the restaurant.

Not sure if that repeat is intentional or not.

Edited by AndrolGenhald
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

Loading...
  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    • No registered users viewing this page.
×
×
  • Create New...