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First, some background. This is the rough draft for the Prologue of the first book in a saga about a wide variety of people around the world who gain superpowers after a world-altering event. The character that the Prologue is focused on is not the MC, and probably won't have a POV again for a long time into the series. He is integral to the plot, but on-screen won't be very involved. I decided to use him to introduce the story because apart from this scene it's taking a while for action to develop and I thought it would be a good way to hook readers and give them a glimpse of what's in store. With that in mind I want to ask anyone who takes the time to read this to answer a couple questions for me. Does this chapter hook you? If so, what about it grabbed your interest? What are your thoughts on the POV character? Do you get any impressions about his alignment? If so, good or evil? What about his target? Does there seem to be too much mention of blood (and/or) gore? Enough that it would scare YA readers from purchasing the novel? What questions do you want answered after reading this chapter? Do you notice any problems / inconsistencies (in regards to grammar or storytelling)? Any additional thoughts? I'll edit in some more questions if anything comes to mind. Keep in mind this is a rough draft and therefore will probably be rewritten with more detail, and likely some things cut out. Oh and, in case you didn't see the tags I'll make sure to bold this warning: There's a bit of blood and some swearing in here. Beware. Thank you, hope you enjoy.
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