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So I've been working on some fantasy, but I've run into a dead end, or at least some rocky terrain. So I have this character who is a slaver. He's real nasty and curses and scowls, spits, and whacks people with sticks. The problem is that I need to turn him completely around. He is speaking to a crowd of buyers for his slaves, acting like a perfect salesman. I just can't get it to click, him speaking persuasively and not negatively. Any suggestions, favorite ways to write salespeople, etc.