I figured I should make a thread specifically for the redraft and redone worldbuilding. If you want to read all my old chapters then just go here, but I don't think they're all that good so... I dunno. You do you.
As I add stuff here I'll also compile it into the OP for easy access. It'll mostly be worldbuilding and such rather than additional chapters because I'm hoping for this to be a publishable roughie (that is to say I won't have to completely redo the book from scratch again in order to make it viable for editing).
Buuuuuuuut here's Chapter 1 anyways:
That's it for now. I'm just getting the thread-making out of the way.