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No content warnings for this one. I plan on getting caught up on critiques, hopefully starting as soon as this week. I don't usually like to provide a lot of preamble to my subs, but recognizing that this not-speculative, not-fiction submission might not be everybody's bag, a few considerations: * Do the lyrics make sense? * Do they resonate? * Does everything seem to be in the right order? * Does the piece seem complete? Optionally, I've included a clip of the melody as well. Apologies for the even scrappier scrap recording than I intended. No accompaniment, because I didn't have time to put my guitar and recording gear back together - torn down to prevent the puppy chewing on them, of course. Anyway, if you choose to listen to the recording, comments on rhythm and melody are welcome as well. I will add at least one instrumental break, more likely two, between verses in the final product.