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Sarah B posted a topic in Reading ExcusesHello All! Does chapter 1 still need work? Yes, yes it does. Am I subbing chapter 2 instead? Yes, yes I am. Thank you for all the comments for chapter 1. It's going to take me some time to sort out exactly what to do with that chapter, so I'm going to leave it for now and loop back around later. Possibly, I'll wait until after nailing down the ending 2nd/3rd draft to make sure there's some symmetry between them. So here is chapter 2. I'm not sure what the threshold is on language warning, so I added a mild language tag just in case. This chapter is not original to draft one, but a sort of aftermarket patch to hopefully smooth out some issues :-)