Hey Guys!
Let me know your thoughts on my submission.
I'm most interested in:
- Where is the story headed?
- How was the tone?
- How can I improve my voice?
- Strength of plot?
- How interesting is this to you?
Please don't make specific story-related suggestions (like what my characters should do the next chapter), and try to ignore any typos I may have missed. Anything else would be terrific!