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So, back after the end of the First Game of Sanderson Elimination, I said I would work on a story for it, since it seemed like good enough material. I eventually got sidetracked and stopped after coming across a few difficulties, like trying to main a balance between story and exposition and all that. I was planning on showing it to some friends as well, who haven't read Mistborn or anything at all, so I tried explaining allomancy and Scadrial and all that, and I dunno. My words stopped feeling right. But I dunno, here it is. I think those are notes I was making up for character descriptions and mannerisms (with some artistic liberties taken. I really hope I don't offend anybody by how I portrayed them But yeah. That's what I had. Please let me know of any corrections/suggestions/criticisms, anything. Edit: Also, sorry for any problems with paragraph inconsistency. Darn forums not copying over tab presses. :/