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Sarah B posted a topic in Reading ExcusesAfter some heavy revisions, here is Chapter 1 again. I've cut it down to one scene and hopefully cleared up most of the issues from the last sub. All of the Alard characters are suposed to be they/them but were he/him in a previous draft. I think I've caught all the slips this time, but if I missed any please call them out. Thanks for reading and critiquing!
Sarah B posted a topic in Reading ExcusesWell, here is the first chapter of my ill fated story. Please see the warning in the email about a potential stress element. This story is Space Opera/Social Scifi I love hard scifi, but this is definetly not hard scifi. That being said, if any of the tech particularly bugs you, please feel free to call it out. Thanks for reading! Sarah B