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How would Ishar know if another herald died? I seem to remember in The Way of Kings opening that Kalak didn’t know that Taln died in the battle. Not until Jezrien told him at leadt. Do we have any confirmation that a herald knows when another herald dies? Jezrien’s death was a final death so thats different. I assumed that was the only reason the other heralds felt it. I do agree that the Stormfather is portrayed as way different in this prologue but his knowledge of a herald’s death makes me think it must be the real Stormfather.

I'd agree that more than 5 might be a bit much. I've still got a backlog of stuff to critique from the last two weeks, although the start of the school year has a little to do with that also Will777r

Hey guys Here's my next chapter. As always I appreciate the suggestions and feedback! This brings a close to Act 1 - Hopefully it grabs you and makes you want to get to the meat of the book. Chapter 10 - Albione journeys to the Monastery of Rasole as punishment for his behavior. Here's the summary's for the first 9 chapters. Chapter 1 Summary - Albione rescues a rival militia commander, but ends up losing the knight he's sworn to protect. A night elf raid has overrun the walls Chapter 2 Summary - Charom, Albione's older brother, is in charge of the High Priestess' guard detail when the temple comes under attack. Chapter 3 Summary - Albione rescues the High Priestess and accompanies her and his brother Charom to the wall. What he finds is completely unexpected. Chapter 4 Summary - Albione is summoned to a meeting with his immediate Superior to face the consequences of his actions on the wall. Chapter 5 Summary - A messenger delivers a dangerous package to Albione's room. When he opens it, the nightmare gets worse. Chapter 6 Summary - Albione returns to his family's estate to fulfill his vow of seclusion, but finds himself further away from his God. Chapter 7 Summary - Albione returns to the temple, but two expriences make him question his faith further Chapter 8 Summary - Albione meets with an old friend who only fuels the fire of his frustration Chapter 9 Summary - Albione makes a foolish mistake which causes the temple to finally lose patience with him. Will777r

I also didn't submit the previous week and would like to submit this time if there's still room Will777r