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  1. sorry I couldn't comment earlier, but wow. I'm pretty intrigued. I've only read the prologue so far (I don't have much time to read it all now) but it was very gripping. I'm not much of a critic, but I have a few thoughts. Also people, have probably already said this, so sorry if I repeat a few things. You added a lot of descriptions to your story. they were good descriptions, but they were mostly using sight and sound. If you wanted to add variety, you could replace some with descriptions of the smells, the textures and the temperatures. Make it feel like you're there, not just watching it. the only other thing I can think of was it was a bit drawn out. I think shortening it a small bit will add to the intrigue and mystery. I really liked it though, and again I'm not very good at giving solid advice. I hope you continue to work on it.
  2. Shallan: Where can I find Jasnah Kholin 15 super easy DIY soulcaster repairs How do I know if he's in to me? What do your jam choices say about you, quiz Ethics??? How to make a stick catch fire Why wont my stick burn? SERIOUSLY, how do I make this stupid stick catch fire!!!!!!! Funny jokes to impress your boyfriend How to poop efficiently in battle armor
  3. Segregation
  4. I want Moash to get some sort of mission to kill Kaladin with his Honorblade and new powers but when he try’s to, all of Bridge Four becomes radiant and backs Kaladin up. Moash is so stunned he just silently leaves. Also, Moash’s Bridge Four tattoo disappears like Kaladin’s because it’s no longer part of him.
  5. Secret New word: Blue The opposite word being orange.
  6. I’ve been demoted! I go from being an amazing King’s Wit to being a stuffy old bald guy that sucks happiness and joy from all everyone.:(

    Even my emoji’s bald.

    1. Nathrangking


      Well I mean allomancy and stuff......

    2. Lunamor


      Oh no! I’m sorry to inform you that the baldness does not improve with age :P

    3. TheGirlWhoLookedUp



      If I use this emoji, no one will no.

  7. Welcome to the Shard! What’s your favorite Sanderson book that you’ve read?
  8. Hiding
  9. YKYASFW you try to use marbles as currency.
  10. So, I’m not sure if this counts as a meme, but it’s the SA characters singing Bohemian Rhapsody. It’s spoiled for length.
  11. Graceless
  12. Thanks. Also, though I didn’t intentionally put him in there, I found Rlain’s name as well.
  13. Decomposing
  14. Camping
  15. I made a cosmere word search. I probably missed a few important names, but it has names from Stormlight Archives, Mistborn, Elantris, and Warbreaker. It was a lot bigger, but I cut it down.