Blessed peace

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  1. Hi, all. this is my first pice i think is kind of good. But tell me please, A. are you interested? B. how are the characters? And C. waht is your feeling of the city? And of course what's wrong with it.
  2. Of I'm interested, @Robinski. And actually I'm in the process of correcting my errors (and of course making new ones), and i will repost it soonis. I'm not familiar with it, what is it?
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    "O.K. now Tenareo put the ring on the first finger of the right hand of the groom and say: 'With this ring you are here by hallowed to me'." "With this ring you are here by hallowed to me" "Hallowed. Hallowed. Hallowed." Luwadan boomed. "Now we shall read the marriage contract: on the twenty eighth day of the month of vinuarch In the city of Alleyverse I the bride, Tenareo daughter of Lenare, promise from this day on to the groom, Anthony son of alexander, to provide for him, to cloth him and to cherish him and in case of breaking this contract I will pay him the amount of two hundred sky broams. Here is the signature of the witnesses Dru and Mr. Amber." He handed the paper to Tenareo. "Give him the contract, it's his to keep." "Now we shall make a blessing on the cup of wine. Blessed be you, Adonalsium our god, king of the universe, which created all to honor himself. Blessed be you, Adonalsium our god, king of the universe, creator of mankind. Blessed be you, Adonalsium our god, king of the universe that created man in his own image and form, and made out of him an everlasting edifice. Blessed be you, Adonalsium our god, king of the universe, who created joy and delight, groom and bride, gladness song amusement and exultation. Love and brotherhood peace and friendship. Blessed be you, Adonalsium our god, who rejoices groom and bride." Again he gave them the cup to take a sip each, then Luwadan downed the whole thing and put it on the ground. "Step on it." He ordered Anthony. Anthony did so. The cup shuttered. "We do that to remind you that sometimes life is hard but fear not, you will emerge from them because you are happy. Congratulations."
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    "Good. Now take the ring and ask him." "Will you be my husband?" Tena implored.
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    "O.K. now Anthony put the ring on the first finger of the right hand of the bride and say: 'With this ring you are here by hallowed to me'." "With this ring you are here by hallowed to me." Anthony repeated after him, putting the ring on Tena's finger. "Hallowed. Hallowed. Hallowed." Luwadun thundered. "Now we shall read the marriage contract:" he continued, waiting to no one. "on the twenty eighth day of the month of vinuarch, In the city of Alleyverse I the groom, son of alexander, promise from this day on to the bride, Tenareo daughter of Lenare, to provide for her, to cloth her and to cherish her and in case of breaking this contract I will pay her the amount of two hundred sky broams. Here is the signature of the witnesses Dru and Mr. Amber." He handed the paper to Anthony. "Give her the contract, it's her's to keep." "Tenareo your ring, please." Luwadan asked putting his other hand out. Then he enquired "Tenareo this ring is yours?" "Yes" Anthony replied. "Witnesses," Luwadan turned to show them the ring. "Do you deem it's worth more than a clear chip?"
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    "Good. Now take the ring and ask her." "Will you be my wife?" Anthony pleaded.
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    "Come here please and stand as witnesses under this canopy." Luwadan said, gesturing for Dwig and Mr. Amber to come closer. Then he took out of his duster a small bottle of low alcohol wine and a plain glass cup, he filled the cup to its brim with blood red wine. Then, glass resting on his palm, he intoned "Blessed be you, Adonalsium our god, king of the universe that sanctified us in his commandments, and ordered us the laws of incest. And forbade us the engaged, and permitted those who are wedded to us by canopy and hallowing" his voice fell and rose in the ancient rhythm. He gave the cup to Anthony to sip from and then to Tena. "Anthony your ring, please." Luwadan asked putting his other hand out. Then he enquired "Anthony this ring is yours?" "Yes" Anthony replied. "Witnesses," Luwadan turned to show them the ring. "Do you deem it's worth more than a clear chip?" @AxeliustheGreat @#Voidapple @Dr. Dapper @Life&Death
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    "Tena and Anthony we are ready?" Luwadan inquired, they nodded. "So why don't we start?" Tena went to sit with Dru and Seom, their height differences forming stairs, but never mind that. Luwadan was nervous and nervous men do and think all kind of wired stuff. Anthony tapped his shoulder "now what?" "hemmf… so let's go over to Tena and cover her face. Dwig, Mr. Amber. Come with us please." He and Anthony started moving he didn’t look back to see if they were following. They got to the table, Anthony caressing Tena's cheek as he covered her face. "And now to the canopy" they turned about and advanced towards the canopy, it was made of pure white silk stretched between four wooden posts. They reached the canopy and turned to look at the bride and her entourage coming towards them. Luwadan saw a tear falling from Anthony's eye. Tena joind them under the canopy. Luwadan opend his mouth. "With a good omen and good luck." He intoned, hoping it had the desired effect. "Welcome to the wedding celebration of Anthony son of alexander and Tenareo daughter of Lenare". "Who are the witnesses? We need tow who are not related to the bride and groom."
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  15. Neh...
  16. Um, actually that's cadmium. Rock has sideburns but shaves his head and chin.
  17. The guard station outside of tashikk
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    "Anthony here asked me to preform his wedding ceremony, i assume you are Tena, right?" Her pregnency was obvious, but best not to talk about that. "Hello Anthony, shall we begin preparing to the ceremony?"
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    It took ? Quite some time to find the location of the wedding he was supposed to officiate, well if he was late he would tell them it was a tradition of old, to be late to weddings, that way you came only for the good stuff. That might not work for him this time, though. And he wasn't getting any closer, that's what you get for filling your zinc metal minds whenever you can, you are so dumb you can't even find a storming meadow. These thoughts repeated themselves over and over in his head, then a new thought occurred to him. "Sen. why had we agree to do this?" Senhav his spren was on his shoulder, a little woman the color of ink. She peered at him puzzled. "What do you mean, why do we do what? Going to the wedding? because we promised, and as for why we did that, you know the answer." Like Sen said, he knew. The search. It dominated his life, filled his hours and guided him in most his dids. "Luwadan, tap your metal minds, and find this meadow, it's getting late." Sen prompted him, like he didn't know it was late, even in his dim state he knew that. He stopped filling his metal minds, and then when his regular state didn't help to find the way he tapped his zinc, sounds and signs he could not understand otherwise, gave him the direction hie needed. A silent pach of wood, a slope that was so slight you would say it's not a slope at all. Luwadan stopped taping zinc as he found one of the way-signs Anthony gave him. And so he came into the destined meadow. Some people were already there but not many so wasn't too late, that was good. He looked down at his black duster-like mantle which he wore above his usual buttoned shirt and dark trousers, not ripped, good. now where was Anthony? Luwadan did not meet with Tena yet, but maybe she knew the Girl, he would have to ask her. oh, there they were, Standing together greeting the guests. "Ready Sen? we have a wedding to officiate". He walked towards them. then he saw that what passed between the sharply dressed man and the couple was not greetigs.
  20. As many as a waffle cook can cook if a waffle cook know how to cook waffles
  21. Eliminated bliming, non conforming innovative. Where would you trek to?