FoxOfFire

As there are no page numbers, I will use pages after the chapter header to show where these are. The first is on the 9th page of chap. 4 in the middle/left of the page. The text bubble points to Lord Delius. However, it doesn't make sense for Lord Delius to be the one who says this since he is walking away in the previous frame, and is almost gone by this one. I think it was intended that Baon (the only other character in the frame) be who says this line. This would only make sense if Baon speaks Lossandin though. The second is on the 2nd page of chap. 6 on the bottom right of the page. One too many 'more's here. Either one of them needs to leave, or there should be a comma/semicolon before the second 'more'.

Wow! I LOVE this theory! I think I'm only not sold on that figments are the consciousnesses in the AI. Here are some WoB's that could be interpreted as supporting your theory though. 1. 2.

pg. 207, US hardcover. "You're scheduled for pickup again at 9000." Unless this is weird Starsight time, that should probably be 0900.