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The 't' on they should be un-italic. Same thing on other emphasised words in an italic phrase throughout. pole? Un-italic for 'the knight said'. Same in many other places.
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I've only found one in this one, I'm slipping.
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should be half star "would be difficult TO show off"? MANBLADE! "man's blade" I think? stand-by Extraneous 'were'
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Paragraph 5 should be "What had driven . . . "
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ReDawn (Skyward Novella 2) Draft 3.0 - 100%
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ReDawn (Skyward Novella 2) Draft 3.0 - 59% OM NOM NOM Brandon eats novella drafts for breakfast.
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Wax & Wayne 4 66% Evershore 25%
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Heuristic Algorithm and Reasoning Response Engine with Ethan Skarstedt it's a short story in Armored Changes I'd make: Firstborn is one word, not two I'd put Defending Elysium next to Skyward and Starsight, and Mitosis next to Reckoners.
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Cytonic 1st Proofread - 100% Evershore (Skyward Novella 3) Draft 1.0 - 19%
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Wax & Wayne Book 4 (Mistborn 7) - 48%
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Well that went fast ReDawn (Skyward Novella 2) Draft 1.0 - 100%
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ReDawn (Skyward Novella 2) Draft 1.0 - 95%
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ReDawn (Skyward Novella 2) Draft 1.0 - 80%
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