Yay, there's more! Sorry it took me awhile to get to this.
So first off, I really liked the battle scenes in the middle of his conversation with the nurse. It was kinda weird, but also really cool and interesting. I’m loving that we’re getting his backstory this way (which is what I assume we’re getting, though I could be wrong). And the past scene where the doctor tells him he may never see again, was interesting. I’m enjoying learning more about the character.
One of my complaints is just that the character is kind of unrelatable, but that’s also a good thing. Though I can’t relate to him much, he is very different from many characters I’ve read about, which is fun.
Also, the paragraph where the doctor says, “Listen to me. ..... but I’m sure that they will matter to someone else.” seemed very unlike how he had been previously acting, and reminded me a bit of Devlin. It was a bit suspicious and creepy.
I think that’s all my thoughts, hope it helps!