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  1. I noticed most of these through my first read and was frustrated. I have no idea who cynder is compared to acron.. Glad to see this is already a topic. Kinda annoying how so much time was put into this but there seem to be a ton of little mistakes. Here's something I see no one has mentioned: Chapter 3, page 14: khriss asks Kenton is he is sure that he knows that it's only two days to the nearest town. And he responds "magic!". That response feels like it should follow the question being "how do you know it's only two days out? ". Not why. It doesn't make sense with why. Also why is Kenton a darker brown when every other lightsider is pale and white? Just to make him stand out?
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