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	I'm just gonna share random things I've written here every so often.
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]]></description><language>en</language><item><title>The writing of a play</title><link>https://www.17thshard.com/blogs/entry/1672-the-writing-of-a-play/</link><description><![CDATA[<p>
	Earlier this year, for theatre class, I wrote this comedic one act play as an assignment. It's alright, I suppose. Do note that it's unfinished, because there was a page limit, and I was trying to come up with an ending that fit, but the plot is still resolved at the end of what I wrote.
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]]></description><guid isPermaLink="false">1672</guid><pubDate>Thu, 04 Jun 2026 15:39:33 +0000</pubDate></item><item><title>Collaborative storymaking</title><link>https://www.17thshard.com/blogs/entry/1436-collaborative-storymaking/</link><description><![CDATA[<p>
	Taking a little break from stuff I wrote in the past, this is something I wrote with my writing club just yesterday.
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	The premise is that everyone starts a story, then passes it along to the next person after 5 minutes, until it goes back around to the original person. This is the cool wacky formatted story that I started. Note that only the underlined text was written by me, and a \ symbol indicates a change in writer. Also the line spacing is weird, idk why.
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	Corporate horror wasn't my original intention, but I love where this was taken. Reminds me of some SCP Foundation writing.
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]]></description><guid isPermaLink="false">1436</guid><pubDate>Fri, 13 Mar 2026 02:13:45 +0000</pubDate></item><item><title>An abandoned setting</title><link>https://www.17thshard.com/blogs/entry/1421-an-abandoned-setting/</link><description><![CDATA[<p>
	When I was in a very Brandon Sanderson phase of my life, I created a nameless setting that I wrote a few works in. Originally, it would have spanned the whole universe, but the only two things I wrote were on the same planet, Flers.
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			So uh the magic system...
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			I never actually came up with concrete laws. But it revolves around gemstones and heat. Different gemstones have different abilities and stuff, the main two showing up in the novellas I wrote were A: Creating an inter-dimensional gateway to a hellish world of incomprehensible beings (various diamonds) and B: Controlling/being controlled by said incomprehensible beings (amethyst). And then they can also store information, and the Syndicate has pretty much supercomputers and magitech stuff going on. And then teleportation is a thing as well.
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	Anyway, I'll just dump setting information, and mention what I like at the end.
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	So, initially, humanity is just on the planet Flers, on an island continent in the south. A group who has basically monopolized the magic system is taking over, and plans a grand ritual thing that will genocide everyone not a part of them. However, a man named Xeflerx sabotages the ritual, causing it instead to teleport them all away to a safe place instead. He ends up on a new continent to the north, where he founds the kingdom of Xefleara. This ends up sending a large number of the refugees to other habitable planets as well, as the spell would "take them to a safe place" without distance necessarily being a factor.
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	A group of these refugees create "The Syndicate of the Great Gem", a space-faring organization that takes over a large number of planets, and have very advanced magitech stuff. They are led by the "Supreme General", a man who has had his lifespan increased thanks to implants of gemstone, and he aims for the "Great Gem", a gemstone that will supposedly grant greater power than all others. (This gemstone, as it turns out, is citrine, and it's power is to control other gemstones)
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	Meanwhile in Xefleara, over a thousand years later, a couple create a gateway to another dimension of beings that consume heat, and the husband ends up mind-controlled by them, who use him to take over the kingdom. These beings, known as the wraiths, prefer consuming the heat of humans, and so institute a system where criminals are thrown to them. They are unable to leave a certain radius most of the time, because sunlight and moonlight destroys them if they go too far away from their portal. At the end of my novella, one of the protagonists manages to take control of the wraiths from the king, and begins planning to take back the kingdom.
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	Anyway I like the Syndicate. I didn't talk much about them, but they have some cool aesthetics, and I like looking at the humans in super huge powerful organizations.
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]]></description><guid isPermaLink="false">1421</guid><pubDate>Tue, 10 Mar 2026 15:40:17 +0000</pubDate></item><item><title>Looking back on epigraphs</title><link>https://www.17thshard.com/blogs/entry/1420-looking-back-on-epigraphs/</link><description><![CDATA[<p>
	About two years ago, I wrote one novella and four short stories in a setting of my own creation. I've looked down on it as weaker writing, but now that I'm looking back, I think there are things worth salvaging. My short story collection especially, as I wrote it later.
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	One of the things I did was add little "Syndicate logs", information from a mysterious organization from space throughout the collection, to shed light on their motives and plans. I'll put them below. Without context of the setting, they won't be completely understandable, but I thought I'd put them down here. They're similar to the epigraphs throughout <em>The Stormlight Archive</em>.
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			We have found the planet known as the Originator, which the inhabitants call “Flers.” There is nothing of note there, besides its historical value, as both of the societies living there appear to be in a primitive state, though the North appears to be advancing quickly, they do not have what the Southerners have. Such great power, a weaker variant of what we use, but the Southerners waste it. Because of its historical value, and potential to grow, however, we have saved its coordinates.<br />
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			Carol and Peter were found attempting to recruit Flersians to the Syndicate, despite Syndicate Log 39429-B clearly stating that they are not to be interacted with until the Supreme General declares otherwise. As such, the two were left on Flers to rot, on the southern continent. Their implants were not removed, however they are no longer to be considered part of the Syndicate.<br />
			-4381 AGS, the 84th day<br />
			 
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			Gems give us power. The Great Gem will give us power greater than all others. The Supreme General will lead us forever, until we find it. Let this be the prime directive of the newly formed Syndicate of the Great Gem.
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			 Umm… is this thing on? I… Oh, it’s glowing, it probably is. Well, ah, hello! Aaron just hired me, so he’s tasked me with updating an old, unimportant log with new information. Now let’s see here, I think he said he was invading the Originator? Personally, I hardly think that’s unimportant, but what do I know? But yes, he’ll be attempting to collect the trans-universal gateway technology from it. He didn’t say why, but if I had to guess, it’s probably to increase the power of our Master Jewel. <br />
			    I wonder if Carol and Peter are still there. I just listened to the last entry to this log, and I can only imagine how faulty these implants must have been centuries ago. Made from plants? Really? Surely they would break down anywhere but a habitable planet. If they are still alive, I hope Aaron brings me their implants. I’d love to get a closer look, the damned man won’t let me dissect the viral ones, they’re ‘too valuable’ apparently.<br />
			    Oh, Aaron, don’t take that personally, it just slipped out. Although, knowing you, you probably won’t even listen to this log.<br />
			    Anyway, back to the log, apparently the southern continent hasn’t advanced nearly at all, but the northerners have advanced considerably, and those are the ones who are going to be invaded. For their own sakes, they probably should just give up and submit to us. Doesn’t matter if they’re on the verge of discovering fission weapons, without gem technology, they’re doomed to fail.<br />
			    Unless… what if they use the heat-beings… But no. They probably aren’t powerful enough. I guess it was just wishful thinking. Aaron always says I’m too obsessed with science and its potentials. But aren’t we literally called ‘The Syndicate of the Great Gem?’ We practically worship a scientific theory!<br />
			    Anyway, this is ending up twice as long as the other logs under 39429, so I’ll just sign off now.<br />
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	The writing is mid of course, but I'm kind of in love with the last one. The idea of having all these cold clinical logs, and then just having one that's created by an inexperienced newbie to show the human element seems quite fun. As such, I hope to do something similar.
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	In fact, I'm thinking my next large project will be a collection of interconnected short stories, with something like thing (but better) in the background. Something like Isaac Asimov's <em>I Robot</em> or <em>Robot Dreams</em>.
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	Let me know if y'all have any thoughts.
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	This was also something I made at that writing camp, this one had a bit more work put into it, but I don't like it as much because the gayness isn't the focus of the story, and the poor writing I feel like is more noticable. I also accidentally stole House of Leaves's colored text gimmick without knowing about it. (Also copy+paste is weird, the colored text is supposed to also be bold, but for some reason the entire document is bold. Ah well.
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">A ring of the doorbell. That was how it began last time, and that was how it would begin again. Evelyn immediately dashed to the front door. </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">She</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> had to be there, and she couldn’t let </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">her</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> in.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">But this time, there was nothing there. Not even a cold whisper. But then what had…</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">A flash of realization. She hadn’t locked the back door, had she? Before her mind could even put the pieces together her legs were already moving. By the time she made it, the knob had already begun to turn.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">No.</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> Evelyn slammed the lock to the side with all her strength. And it worked, the movement stopped. Another victory—she couldn’t help but gloat. “</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">You</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> can’t get in. I won’t let </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">you</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">There was silence. Evelyn’s thoughts turned to Charlotte, still sleeping peacefully upstairs. But there was no need to wake her up—not when Evelyn could take care of this situation just fine.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Are </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">you</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> listening? </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">You</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> can’t come in.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Only silence followed. Evelyn wasn’t sure if she should have expected anything else.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Regardless, she was satisfied with her work, so she left the back door, thinking about what had happened. The doorbell was a distraction this time. If that was what </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> could already do, how crafty could </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> get? Evelyn had to do something </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">now</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">, before </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> could get in.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Evelyn took herself to the kitchen, and grabbed a box of pasta from the cabinet. It would go perfectly with her family sauce recipe. Though the smell was pungent, the taste was divine. </span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">After she had her fill—contemplating just how late she was eating dinner</span><span style="background-color:#ffffff;color:#202122;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">—</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she made her way to the front door once more and peered through the window. The welcome mat, sickeningly sweet, read out “Welcome to our home” with a pattern of red roses around the words that would light up a few moments after the doorbell rang. This gateway was her home’s greatest vulnerability. When </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> rang the doorbell last night, Evelyn thankfully made it in time to deter </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">her</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">. She should’ve realized that </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> wouldn’t try the same trick two nights in a row.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Still, it wouldn’t do well to just ignore the front door. If Evelyn ever got complacent and stopped checking it, no doubt </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> would get in. Evelyn would have also loved to remove the damned welcome mat, but important as it was to not let </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">her</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> in, it would likely be worse for Evelyn to go out where </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> was. </span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Evelyn!” It was Charlotte. And she sounded scared. “Evelyn, are you there?”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The back door was locked, and </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> wouldn’t try to get in through the front door again. The house was safe from </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">her</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">—for tonight at least—so Evelyn could tend to Charlotte. “I’m coming dear.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">She climbed up the stairs, and saw Charlotte in her bed. “Are you okay?”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“I’m okay,” Charlotte replied, “But I woke up and saw you missing. Did </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> try to get inside again?”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Yes, </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> did. But I secured both doors tonight. We’re safe for now. And I made pasta. Do you want any?”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“No thanks, I’d rather save as much as we can for later. It </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">is</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> amazing, though.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Thank you. I’m going to put the rest of it in the fridge for tomorrow night. I’ll be right back.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Evelyn walked back down to the kitchen and put the rest of the pasta into the fridge. </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">She</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> almost got in that night, but with all luck, Evelyn wouldn’t have to worry about </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">her</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> ever again soon enough. She turned around to leave the kitchen.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">And then she saw that welcome mat. It was glowing. But… It was in front of the kitchen window. Why was it—</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“NO!”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Evelyn tried to make it in time to hold the window down, to close the blinds, to do </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">anything</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> to keep </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">her</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> out.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">But it was too late. </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">She</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> got in.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">~~~</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Charlotte never did believe </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> got in. Of course she realized it, deep down, but she refused to believe it. She should have believed it when Evelyn stopped talking about </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">her</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> as much. She should have believed it when Evelyn’s skin got just a little bit colder. She should have believed it when she noticed the pasta tasted different, not like heaven like before, but as if it was missing something very important.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">After all, she could trust Evelyn. What were a few oddities anyway? Charlotte didn’t dare think of </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">the alternative</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">When Evelyn told Charlotte after a week that </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">was gone for good, she was elated. She didn’t consider for even a moment that </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> wasn’t trying to get in anymore because </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> had already made it. It was a joyous occasion, and there wasn’t any reason to suppose otherwise. </span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Charlotte, you’re back! Did your checkup turn out okay?” Evelyn said as Charlotte stepped through the door.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Oh it was </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">horrible</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Really? What happened?”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Charlotte told Evelyn about how the doctors told her that there was something </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">horribly wrong</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> with her body, and that they said she would have to stay overnight.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“They were acting really weird and I was scared! Naturally, I got out of there as soon as I could. I don’t think I’ll be going back.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“It’s okay, you’re right, you shouldn’t go back.” Said Evelyn.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Charlotte attempted to pull herself together “It wasn’t just that, but everyone was hiding from me when I was walking back home. They were giving me strange looks and whispering such </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">terrible things</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> about me.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Charlotte tried not to listen to those whispers. They might convince her of </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">things that just couldn’t be true</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">. </span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Well, if you don’t feel safe out there, maybe you should stay inside with me?”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Yeah, I think that’s a good idea. Thanks.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Charlotte never believed </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> got in. One night, she went to bed, noting how much </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">weight</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> she had lost. She knew it must have been from all of her exercise; </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">the strange marks on her body</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> had nothing to do with it. She slowly fell asleep.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The next morning, she didn’t get up. </span><span style="background-color:#ffffff;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">But </span><span style="background-color:#f4e0e0;color:#5b0f00;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">she</span><span style="background-color:#ffffff;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> did.</span></b>
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]]></description><guid isPermaLink="false">1414</guid><pubDate>Wed, 04 Mar 2026 13:07:24 +0000</pubDate></item><item><title>"Obvious truths" (Toxic yuri short story)</title><link>https://www.17thshard.com/blogs/entry/1413-obvious-truths-toxic-yuri-short-story/</link><description><![CDATA[<p>
	This was a thing I wrote last year at a writing camp. We were given a prompt to show a reversal of who typically has power in a situation. It's pretty mid, but I like it still.
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Hmmm Lies</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">July 14, 2025</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Obvious Truths</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Servant!”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Yes, Queen?”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The servant entered the Queen’s chambers. The Queen did not turn to face her.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Were you followed?”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“No, mistress. What did you call me for?”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Shut the door, and then, let’s say… Tidy up my bed.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The servant turned to the spotless bed. “As you command, mistress.” She shut the door, and then moved to sit on the bed.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The queen gazed at her servant. She </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"><em>obviously</em> </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">had never bothered to learn Emma’s name, such things as that were obviously below her. Emma </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">was</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> beautiful of course, as anyone with a brain could see. Today she was wearing a white dress, adorned with diamonds all over. The Queen gave all of her dresses to the servants when she was tired of them. It obviously didn’t mean anything that the Queen had been wearing the same dress for a decade, or that Emma always seemed to be the only servant to get new dresses.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“I say, mistress, I have been wearing this dress for some time now. Surely your eyes tire of such a sight as my own?” Emma said, with an innocent look in her eyes.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Of course not! You look radiant.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“You need not be so kind. On your leave, tomorrow I shall go to the market and purchase myself a new one.” Emma stared at the Queen a little harder.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Very well.” The Queen tossed Emma a large ruby. They had gone through this routine countless times before.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Your generosity truly is legendary, mistress. Speaking of which, I have heard your ideas of building an aqueduct, to provide water to all the land.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Yes, it will—”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“But, don’t you think that water could be used better? I had a few ideas that could allow you to live in the even greater luxury that you deserve.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“And these ideas wouldn’t allow us to give the water to the people. Am I correct?”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Your needs far supersede those of the people, mistress.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Mine, and the servants, I suppose.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“No, no, yours alone! The servants having access is a mere… happy accident.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The Queen sighed. “Very well. I shall have it be done.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Delightful. And I imagine I know your next order, mistress?”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Yes yes, get on with it, Emma.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Emma moved closer to the Queen, and wrapped her arms around her. Then she planted a kiss on her lips.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">It went on. And on. This obviously wasn’t what the Queen lived for. The Queen obviously didn’t do anything Emma wanted, just for these moments of pure bliss. And </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">obviously</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">, she was never anything less than the most powerful person in this room. </span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">But, if these things </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">were</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> true, then something had been wrong as of late. The kisses, they felt hollow. There was an emptiness behind Emma’s lips. Mere movements of muscles, rather than true intimacy. Once, Emma was a source of comfort. The Queen felt better when she was around, like it really was worth giving up everything for her. Now, she seemed colder, indifferent to the Queen. She pushed Emma away.</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“What is it, my mistress?”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“I can’t keep doing this anymore. The lies, both from me and you. The way I’ve lost my autonomy. I-I need you to leave. I’m sorry.”</span></b>
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		<p dir="ltr">
			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Emma looked into the Queen’s eyes with an upset look.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">This look quickly turned nasty. “Well, </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">mistress,</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> I must say I’m surprised,” Emma stood up, grabbed the Queen’s chin, and pointed her face at her own. “But, I must also say that </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">I. Don’t. Care</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">. You can’t get rid of me. I have agents everywhere in the palace. And they can cause pain the likes of which you wouldn’t believe.” Emma’s voice cut through the air sharply. It wasn’t like this normally. Usually, it was soft, if mischievous. “But of course, </span><em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">obviously</span></em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">, you don’t know this. </span><em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">Obviously</span></em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> you won’t give us reason to hunt you down. And </span><em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">obviously</span></em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">, you will allow me to continue to rule the queendom.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The Queen was in shock. She obv— She clearly thought Emma was a lone cunning fox, not a leader of some sort of conspiracy. But then, until recently, the Queen thought Emma really cared about her. Obviously—Damn, that was a hard habit to break—The Queen knew nothing about Emma.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">“Well, will you still be wanting my services? I wouldn’t want you to be </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">completely</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> miserable.”</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">The Queen looked at Emma’s lips, and her arms, and the way that dress looked on her. It </span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">was</span><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;"> certainly appealing.</span></b>
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			<b><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">But </span><em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">obviously</span></em><span style="background-color:transparent;color:#000000;font-size:12pt;vertical-align:baseline;">, she had standards... right?</span></b>
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