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Anyone willing to read 4 pages and tear them apart?


Silva

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This basically is exactly what it sounds like.

I’ve got the start of a story, but I need someone to just read it and write a list of everything they now know about the few characters they meet and the world.

It does sound overwhelming, but no one in my life really works because they’ve seen the previous attempts at this story and would infer things.

So if anyone has lots of time on their hands and is willing to read 4 pages, just let me know.

 

Edit: I added a small section, so now it’s at 8 pages.

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