Nexus Darkshade Posted October 17, 2017 Report Share Posted October 17, 2017 I would like some critiquing of these two keteks I wrote today. My masterpiece, which came to me in a random thought: Stars align, and hands, reaching for reaching hands, align stars. Stars align,/ and hands,/ reaching for reaching hands,/ align stars. A ketek I had to think out word by word: Winds raging, battling against men, prepare men battling against raging winds. Winds raging,/ battling against men,/ prepare men/ battling against raging winds. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julio Posted October 17, 2017 Report Share Posted October 17, 2017 THey're good, in my opinion, but... aren't keteks supposed to have five portions, not four? 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexus Darkshade Posted October 18, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2017 17 hours ago, Julio said: THey're good, in my opinion, but... aren't keteks supposed to have five portions, not four? Are they? Sorry, the last time I read the Stormlight Archives was a few months ago. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kynedath Posted November 2, 2017 Report Share Posted November 2, 2017 If you want more info on keteks, this thread is dedicated towards them. But overall, your keteks look pretty good! 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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