the winter system Posted May 26, 2015 Report Share Posted May 26, 2015 "Look again," Wit said, completely serious. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyson Posted May 27, 2015 Report Share Posted May 27, 2015 The dark silhouette of hills on the horizon shifted its form, like a bank of black smoke dancing on a distant wind. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the winter system Posted May 27, 2015 Report Share Posted May 27, 2015 "What is that?" Shallan asked, stepping back. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted June 20, 2015 Report Share Posted June 20, 2015 Shallan's attention was stolen by a haggard voice from behind - Adolin walked forward sluggishly, dropping a bloodied gauntlet to the ground. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the winter system Posted June 20, 2015 Report Share Posted June 20, 2015 "Adolin?" Shallan turned and ran towards him. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted June 21, 2015 Report Share Posted June 21, 2015 His hand slipped open, and a knife fell to clatter on the cobblestones, stained red. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varyn Posted June 21, 2015 Report Share Posted June 21, 2015 He suddenly fell to the ground, his legs giving way despite the Shardplate. "Sadeas is dead," he said, right before he hit the ground. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the winter system Posted June 21, 2015 Report Share Posted June 21, 2015 "What?" Shallan demanded. "Are you okay?" 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varyn Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 She moved towards Adolin, who lay still, not responding. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 Kaladin knelt beside the Highprince's son, checking for wounds. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emilylime Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 "He's fine, other than the shock and possibly a mild concussion," Kaladin announced, frowning slightly. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varyn Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 (edited) Shallan stepped closer to look over his shoulder at Adolin. "Are you sure, Kaladin?" she asked, but there was no response from the self-professed Radiant. "Damnation, Kaladin, are you sure?" Edited June 23, 2015 by Varyn 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 "damnation it, Kaladin, are you sure?" The autocorrect Voidspren got to you, then. All right, back on topic. "Of course I'm storming sure, I trained as a surgeon for my entire childhood," Kaladin said, breathing in while placing a hand on one of Adolin's gemstones. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varyn Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 (edited) "Now, now, don't get flippant with me, Mr. 'I can hold a spear'", she said. Gods, I hate him. Stormlight leaked from several cracks, wisps rising up into the air, then curling around Kaladin like a shroud before dissipating. Edited June 23, 2015 by Varyn 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 "No..." Kaladin breathed in again, trying to will the Stormlight into Adolin - it worked for Bridge Four, why wasn't it working now? 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phantasmagorically Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 Shallan looked around for a moment, suddenly realizing that Wit seemed to have completely disappeared. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emilylime Posted June 23, 2015 Report Share Posted June 23, 2015 Having already put Wit from his mind, Kaladin continued trying to revive Adolin, to no avail. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted July 3, 2015 Report Share Posted July 3, 2015 "The Void Bond is incomplete," a voice whispered. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted July 31, 2015 Report Share Posted July 31, 2015 (edited) One month later - has the forum forgotten about this thread? Well, I will not let it die. I will keep pointlessly bumping it every 0.5 seconds until other people finish my fanfiction for me instead of me putting in any effort; and I will put in as much effort as it takes to get other people to do my effort for me. "Stormlight..." the voice whispered, "stormlight..." Edited July 31, 2015 by Adamir 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxal Posted August 2, 2015 Report Share Posted August 2, 2015 One month later - has the forum forgotten about this thread? Well, I will not let it die. I will keep pointlessly bumping it every 0.5 seconds until other people finish my fanfiction for me instead of me putting in any effort; and I will put in as much effort as it takes to get other people to do my effort for me. "Stormlight..." the voice whispered, "stormlight..." Alright. I truly wish to help you... so here is my best trial... Kaladin raised his head dumbfounded, had he truly heard an unknown voice whispering and why did it speak of stormlight? He had already tried stormlight, it had not work. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mailliw73 Posted August 3, 2015 Report Share Posted August 3, 2015 Not sure what's happened, but here I go. Adolin drifted into the realm of the dead, but he heard that storming bridgeman whispering. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxal Posted August 3, 2015 Report Share Posted August 3, 2015 (edited) Not sure what's happened, but here I go. Adolin drifted into the realm of the dead, but he heard that storming bridgeman whispering. "I am sleeping," he muttered to himself... Couldn't the annoying man leave him alone while he was sleeping, especially when he was about to go swim into a river with Sureblood silently grassing near by? Edited August 4, 2015 by maxal 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the winter system Posted August 9, 2015 Report Share Posted August 9, 2015 "No, you aren't so shut up." Shallan said. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adamir Posted August 9, 2015 Report Share Posted August 9, 2015 "No," the voice of the Almighty rang out, "I've created a plothole to do with stormlight which cannot be adequately summarized in a single sentence without becoming more of a run-on sentence than it already is!" 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the winter system Posted August 9, 2015 Report Share Posted August 9, 2015 Shallan rolled her eyes. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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