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Hello Reading Excuses. This is my first submission and I'm not sure what to expect. I working to get better, and most of your are better than me. Please tell me what works, and what doesn't. If you have any suggestions for my writing, I'd love to hear them. This chapter is a combination of scenes I glued together so I could offer something cohesive in a 5000 word format. My novel is long, and is told through a dozen points of view. I included three in this sample, and the same three characters are present or mentioned in each point of view. I think this selection will give you a fair shot of where I am, and who some of my characters are. Be honest. Thank you, Matt